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| Argentine 2007-03-15 ch 1,  | abuseah, so sweet so sweet, well except dark getting hurt, poor dark but i still can't figure out who was punshing Dark? please tell me! |
| av 2007-02-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseArgentine, It had to be! Why would Krad ask about Riku? good story keep writing. |
| SpiritualEnergy 2006-06-25 ch 1, | abuseHm...very sad, though the emotions came very nicely and easily, and the line "You know, if he still had a foot" seemed to tie the entire situation together in a package of torture for poor Dark. A very nice, deep and serious oneshot. I enjoyed it. |
| Koway Oceshia 2006-06-19 ch 1, | abusehe reminds me of argentine, dark's punisher. well written. nice. my guess is argentine. |
| iman faith 2006-04-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseaww, its so touching (darikuXX) but i kind of freaked out about the "if i had a foot thing" *SHUDDER* |
| NNF 2005-11-22 ch 1, anon. | abusei'd bet my uber-geeky-glasses that it was Argentine, right? *peers hopefully* feed me? lol. i love disturbing images! (the foot part was great) |
| trapt-tage 2005-11-02 ch 1, | abuseVery suprising was the violence, but I rather like the piece overall. The Affect of Daisuke 'leaving' helps to add to the ffeeling of Dark being utterly alone, and it builds the theme identified at the end of hopelessness (and helplessness as well). As for who the antagonist was, surely Krad would not have been asking for the status of teh second maiden. It could have been Krad, for even though Satoshi had been mentioned as being elsewhere, the host could have separated in the same manner Daisuke had, but personally, I get the feeling it was everyone's favorite Argentine. 'Tine and his little kreezy-ness issue. |
| WW 2005-10-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseI think it might be...I'm just guessing, erm...Krad? JUST GUESSING! |
| heka 2005-10-23 ch 1, | abuseerr krad. lol. yes it's dark and creepy but it's nice. :) |
| Heart's Door 2005-08-08 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was so sad! I feel like I'm gonna cry! >< *cough* Anyway, I think you did a really good job on portraying Dark's personality. Though I don't think Daisuke would abandon him, right? |
| Scatter Plot 2005-08-04 ch 1, | abuseo_O I'll do the world a favor and just not say anything. |
| Timetill 2005-08-04 ch 1, | abusei think the punisher was Krad : ) a wonderful story, it completely captured Dark's personality! |
| Nescence Pandora 2005-08-04 ch 1, | abuseDefinitely sad. Definitely dark. Definitely splendid. Definitely Krad. |