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| Violet Shadows 2008-03-18 ch 1,  | abuseReally good idea, but there has been too much resolution in the exposition leading to the characters seeming a bit too OOC. It probably would have been better, to have left to marriage unresolved along with Ranma's gender issues and the problems with the fiances. |
| Passer-by in nerima 2008-01-27 ch 11, anon. | abuseWow pretty good stuff you got here! I'd been reading your Couch trips and I didn't even noticed this one! Nicely done...and oh for the record, unless someone already mentioned it, the smallest denomination of yen in bill is the 10 yen note. 500 yens are in coinage. |
| neo82 2007-09-10 ch 49, | abuseholy crap - couch trips is getting started up again? woo hoo~. nice chapter - as always. |
| ppirilla 2007-09-10 ch 49, | abuseSomehow I knew that something would be coming up. You always manage to start up a new project in time to distract me from classes. I'll have to re-read Couch Trips again. |
| James Axelrad 2007-09-07 ch 49, | abuseexceptional. |
| Wharpt 2007-09-07 ch 49, | abuseWell, that's Hotaru for you... always getting picked on by the bullies. Bad for her, but at least her attackers will never again contribute anything to the gene pool. Besides the Terrible Three, certain Yakuza members and now the Fallen Angels, does the Tendo dojo train any other groups? Say the Tokyo/Nerima police or the JSDF? Keep the Queen Rat on the back burner and bring on the Couch Trips! Hm... I wonder how Ranma the Ghost Cat would react to Ranma the Stripper and vice-versa? |
| Jack Bauer Reborn 2007-09-07 ch 49, | abuseGreat stuff. And we get Couch Trips? Awesome. Guess I have to reread it now. |
| dennisud 2007-09-07 ch 49, | abuseWhat a way to segue to the next section of the story! So... masaki was the girls name huh! ;-) Oh and YES we WILL have Couch Trips! YEAH!! dennisud |
| AMWOOD co 2007-09-07 ch 49, | abuseWow. I just reread Couch Trips and now you're going to do more of it? Cool. Perhaps I should read other unfinished series over and see if it happens again... An amusing bit for the Fallen Angels. Nice twist. See last review for furthur comments. Also, your writing has improved immensly since your writing of Couch Trips. I am thoroughly impressed with that since many writers seem to barely make an effort to use proper grammar and spelling in their work (though I hope you don't mind that I change things to Her Majesty's Proper English in the copies of your work I keep on my own P.C. *grin*). From the offices of AMWOOD co |
| Jerry Unipeg 2007-09-07 ch 49, | abuseI LOVE THIS CHAPTER! (*x5) I love Kodachi new group name "Fallen Angels" |
| Wonderbee31 2007-09-07 ch 49, | abuseNice piece here, and looking forward to what will happen with Book 10. Nice to see Hotaru show up, even if it was very shocking what happened with this version, and now, I look forward to what will happen later on in this universe, as well as the CT-verse. Great storytelling as usual! |
| deitarion/SSokolow 2007-09-07 ch 49, | abuseToo bad Fallen Angels is over, but as you have proven many times over, I'll like whatever you choose to work on. |
| borg rabbit 2007-09-02 ch 48, | abuseWhy not have a separate side story that takes what you have and goes the full blown Sailor Moon route starting about this chapter 'as an omake'. I can picture Luna's reaction to the slutty senshi. (Sorry, had to steal that phrase.) Picture Ranma doing a dance routine (USA), using the moon scepter in suggestive ways. Ciao, Wes |
| James Axelrad 2007-08-31 ch 48, | abusegreat chapter, great fic. |
| Jerry Unipeg 2007-08-31 ch 48, | abuseI LOVE THIS CHAPTER! (*x5) Are you going to use all Sailor Scouts? |