Good story very well written as usual for you.
A somewhat darker and edgier setting than in your other story(which is also good), but all the stronger because of this.
I have high hopes that as well as the side story you mentioned you will still keep this one going for a long time to come.

an interesting chapter.

i wonder though, will things be winding down? or will things shift onto a new story arc with a new antagonist?

Xian Pu or shampoo. choose one, dont keep swapping... it sounds like your talking about 2 diffrent people. i only just relised this chapter that they was the same person

so nodoka gets laid, and genma gets hugged by a bunch of girls.

im pretty sure thats the first fic i read where the girls LIKE genma's panda form. then again im kinda new to the 1/2 fandom.

yakuza? with a Z
not yakusa.


anyway. awesome, i never saw Tatewaki coming into this.

he always struck me as a badguy,

pushy, deluded himself into thinking hes irisistable, and he think any girl he wants is in love with him.

sould like a rapist.

listen to one of his rants to akane, then take out all the flowery **, all thats left is "you know you want it"
but you write him very well.

" ‘I always wished you knew what you did to me felt like. Now that you do, I’m sorry I ever made that wish.’ Ranma continued his travels through the mansion. "

what does that mean? what did nabs do to him?
i fort the only people he slept with was akane and Ukyo.

i wanna se ranma really lose it when they meet the badguys in a HULK SMASH. sort of way.

rape is always a bad thing, but i still want to read the missing scene, could you upload on adultfanficion? you have to be 18+ to use that site anyway, and theres already loads of sick stuff on there, so i doubt it would get banned

hm, im over 18, can i get the lemons?

how would i prove im 18 anyway?

Heh. Yeah, preaching to the choir in your author's note. Expressions of love, intimacy, and caring should never be deemed as equal or worse than violence, murder, and hatred. The sexual activity in this fic is not explicit, and well within bounds of what I'd consider decent. Though I think many people are stupidly hung up on the polyamory issues involved, and that's tainting their expectations.

Great chapters and story btw. I still want to read the lemony goodness though. :)

Another review probably mentioned this, but I'd bet on Konatsu being more of a transsexual than a transvestite. She'd be going for a dip in the Spring of Drowned Girl if it was available... Or trying to get on hormones otherwise if she was aware of their existence.
Though Ranma's mom going to the gay bar... that's awesome. Heh.

it's been great reading this story hope you see fit to start writing a new story "hint" I really like harem fics.

"Kick his butt. Kick his butt." You can almost hear Piyo-Piyo's high pitched voice chanting it out.

How high will Jewel and Gem's bid be when they reach eighteen? Higher than Rama's?

Will the Warriors of the Joketsuzoku use Instant Nannichuan like Shampoo for their new brood mare?

Any other weddings happening besides Tatewaki, Nabiki and Kimi?

This is one of those you hate to read but do so anyway to see whats gonna happen next.

Thanks a great ride so far but I've been missing Couch so yeah!

Waitin til the side story is up!

dennisud

Great wrap up to this arc, and got to say that Hikaru sure deserved his fate there, being the mysognist that he was. Also cool to see how they were ready to defend the club, as well as it seems like Pema has become accepted by all the folks Ranma feels is important in his life.