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Someone
2009-06-08 . chapter 2
...If you steal my sunshine...man I love that song my favorite song from when I was younger, like years ago wow talk about flashbacks...and yet not long after that I started reading fanfiction so there was a time where I was obsessed with that song and with CSI-the show, and slash fanfiction but not CSI fanfics yet...at freakin' age 10(with that song before that)-*in shock-falls to the floor backward anime style, man I never thought that I would feel old and actually come to realize that in some ways I'm still the same but in others I've changed alot in the past almost 9 years-but I'm only 19. Anyway sorry that's my musings of long lost innocence (lol there still a virgin) er atleast how they would define innocence in the South, in other words my love for slash is a longheld secret except with close friends and even now not some of them. Also for a while I thought it your still my sunshine, not if you steal my sunshine but that was way long ago...anway I just came across this story 'cause I love Ryan/Greg but your only the second author I've read/come across that. I love your writing style off to read more.-Brittany
Dreamer22
2009-03-09 . chapter 1
aw ::hugs Ryan::
cocopuffs
2009-01-31 . chapter 13
is there more to the story?
Blatantly Jennifer
2008-12-11 . chapter 13
Man this is *so* unfair. This story hasn't been updated in two years! I have no chance, do I? Lol. Well. Even if I never know what happens next, I want you to know that this story was just so... I don't even know where to begin. You have an amazing talent. You should pursue something professional in the line of writing. You're just so. I can feel everything perfectly. (: I nearly cried at some parts.

You have just touched me, and that's probably a bit weird? Because this is just a story about two guys from a TV show... But the story was so intense and powerful that most of the time I rarely payed attention to the world around me. Lol. (: (And you know, it's kind of funny, because they have an episode of South Park on right now about gay marriage and etc.)

:D Anyway. You're just simply... let me fish for a big word here... pulchritudinous. :D That was rad, wasn't it?

- Jennifer
kirallie
2008-06-18 . chapter 13
Great story! Poor Ryan, Greg, Eric and Nick!! Couldn't one from each lab transfer over? Keep up the excellent work!!
rose
2008-05-19 . chapter 13
Hey there, did you stop this story here?? It´s really good. Please let me know, if this will ever be finished *sad sigh* :-)) rose
Thunder-Kun
2008-04-05 . chapter 13
Aw, so sad. I hope the resolution comes soon, 'cause it's tearing me up that they're apart.
Joralie
2008-01-04 . chapter 13
This story is so good!please update soon!I hope hte next chapter!please write more!please
Lenora
2007-10-23 . chapter 1
I haven't even read the entire first chapter yet, but I just had to point out that I almost expected the theme song to play after Horiatio's comment in the first part of the chapter. I actually had to stop myself from running the theme song through my head.

It's totally a coup to how you write (and you're already one of my fave CSI authors), but also could be due to the fact that I was watching CSI: Miami Season 1 earlier. ^^;;

Oh, and I just wanted to thank you for nudging me towards the dhodges lj community. David Hodges is my favorite character and I needed a good fix of Hodges fics. ^^ Alright, back to reading now.
Freakygirl340
2007-10-22 . chapter 13
FANTASTIC! I love your fic, it is such a good story, most stories alog the crossover plot-line are underdeveloped, but your fic is just perfect in every aspect. The characterisation is amazing, so much like the real characters, and I love the way you have protrayed Hodges- he's such an underappreciated character. The plot is exciting and all chapters are as eagerly read as the previous. The only downside? Where is the rest of it? You simply have to finish the story before you are attcked by that rabid plot bunny with the ears for knives.
auPHE
2007-10-17 . chapter 13
Hey, are you ever going to update this? D: It's been over a year! Please! It's killing me not knowing what'll happen next.
Eben Antipel
2007-08-08 . chapter 13
Okay, i understand that it has been a long time since you updated this story, but i really have to ask you to update this, even if you just make 14 the last chapter. I'm begging you! There hasn't been any fanfictions on here to actually make me cry; none of them have really made you feel for each of the characters like you did and you seem to have so much talent. Please update!
silverrayne621
2007-07-08 . chapter 13
When are you gonna update...even tho it has been a while. I really love the story, cant wait to see if you continue!
riverismyidaho
2007-05-07 . chapter 13
PleasepleasePLEASE don't leave it there! What happens to them? Does Greg come to Miami? Does Ryan go to Las Vegas? Please don't give up on us now! Not so close to a conclusion!
Sanders1975
2007-03-18 . chapter 13
I liked the story and you should contune with the stroy and you should write another Greg and Ryan story.
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