|Reviews for Big Mean Bossy Sister|
| Lady Neferankh 11/18/10 . chapter 1
Nice job here-you've captured a tone of desolation, sadness, and loss.
The disjointed narrative, and the short, or trailing off sentences work very well here. One could honestly picture Dawn's internal voice running something like this, and Spike's actions fit as well.
Keep up the awesome work.
| rainbowishprincess 9/14/05 . chapter 1
Absolutely heartbreaking. But lovely. Favourites list, meet your new addition.
| The Phantom 8/11/05 . chapter 1
Aw. So very, very bittersweet. I really liked the way you would never finish the sentences regarding the deaths. She's not around anymore because she's... And Dawn can't bring herself to complete the thought. Nice, nice, very nice.
| Jasmine Reinier 8/5/05 . chapter 1
T_T ACK! How do you keep writing these? They're amazing!
| MadTom 8/5/05 . chapter 1
Very nice and touching.
Just one little nitpick: this obviously takes place between Seasons 5 and 6. Dawn didn't meet Kit until the first episode of Season 7, and it was Janice whom she hung around with and whose house where she slept over before that.