Grate job showing Snapes mood , too bad it’s a one shot

Yes, your snape is very realistic. lovely. Found you through the C2 place, it is nice to see snape portrayed as a real character and not as a sort of misunderstood james bond type-thing.

I love young snape. He's mean, vindictive, ugly and skinny but i luv him. :)

Nicely nasty little ficlet.

This is sad... Have you known they added main characters Eileen Prince and Tobias Snape? Would be now easier to find fics about her (as well as other characters). (-:

hi there- this is a really good start- please continue it- i would like to find out a bit more about snapes background

A very nice insight into Snape's home life and exactly how I'd imagine it to have been. Good work:-)

This is a fabulous little expansion into that fly-killing memory.

hi, I'm noe (noesumeragi from LJ), I'm lurking around and I absolutely loved this story... Snape is just as I always imagined him, bitter, desiring another path outside his run down home... And the end, killing that flie so ruthlessly... great story! (continue writing teenager!Severus, yes? :)

Yes, he did seem very realistic! Isn't it the scene Harry saw in his mind? (shootingdown flies, I mean)
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This is one of the best Snape fics I have ever read. So short, yet packing so much emotion (or lack of), hearthache, and angst. Oh, angst. I still believe in Snape! This story is brilliant. Thanks.

Nice little fici, that's exactly how I imagine Snape's parents, him working in that factory (do they spin fabric there?)and getting drunk all the time and her not able to leave him. I wonder if Severus might have had some trouble with his respiratory system because of the polluted air and water? Probably he had a permanent snivel? Hence the name Snivellus? This neighbourhood must be unhealthy for kids! And the family, too ...

Nicely depressing and angst-filled. Recommending to the SnapeAngst C2. ;)

Great little story. I love Severus Snape, and you caught his character so precisely. Kudos for you! haha