loved the story plot! please update asap cos i'll be waiting!

please continue!

awesome so far! can't wait to see how this develops!

I'm very interested!Please update ASAP!

This was well written, but there are some issues with your description of Jericho's abilities. The way I understood the scenes where he used it, he mentally controlled Mumbo, while his power is actually the ability to bodily posess anyone he makes eye contact with. His real body rushes into the one he's controlling, and when he's done, it rushes out again. Other than that, however, it's a decent story

I like it! Keep going!

this sounds like a really good story. please write more. i need something to fill my head and this sounds like the perfect thing. i love your other stories so im sure ill love this one too.
your reader,
kara

oh, please update soon ^.^

this was an excellent begining. :]

oh! update ASAP! *adds you to author faves and alert* that'd better do it!

Great fic. I'm doing a storyline from one of the comics too. Really good start I hope you update soon.

hey great story can u keep in going except put alot more R/S n do u really think that hes gonna be in the 5 season of TT?

Cool story! I never knew that Slade had a son! And now I know why he's missing an eye too! THIS IS SO COOL! THINGS ACTUALLY MAKE SENSE WHEN YOU PUT THEM TOGETHER! You also mentioned that Raven and Joseph had some sort of relationship in the comics. I hope that the show doesn't do that because I'm looking forward to a bb/rae relationship. Oh well, time will tell. Awesome first chapter (like always)! UPdATE SOON PLEASE!

You know, ever since I learned about Raven and Jerico from the comics, and that Jerico would be in season 5, I thought that a BB-Raven-Jerico love triangle would be in order. (Not that I was willing to write one) Well, I've found the triangle I was hoping for, so I'm satisfied.

I am most interested in seeing what happens. Excellent so far... The Titans' reactions to the proposal of a new titan were appropriate. They would be extremely cautious.

One more thing:
I found "scaly bunny" VERY funny. It makes me laugh to imagine a crocodile-rabbit hybrid. Is it fluffy and scaly at the same time? Lol.

Keep up the superb work. I want to know what happens next!

~Coco

Hmm...I'm actually writing to ask about the identity of the 'other' father. Could it happen to be Mento/Crimelord? It would fit with your penchant for drawing on the comics for influence on your writing. If you want to reply is my e-mail address.

As usual, another fine piece of fiction from GS! (And no, he didn't pay me to say that-well, not TOO much) The BB/Rae/Jeri triangle is gonna be a blast! And the Slade/Jeri angle will be interesting, very interesting. All I can say is MORE MORE MORE!