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| Ariadne 2005-08-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseA good character study of Cameron. I especially liked the last line. |
| vartanluvva 2005-08-06 ch 1,  | abuseGiven all the uproar on YTDAW about reviews, I felt that I should try harder to review, and I'm practicing with this story ;) Firstly, I absolutely love the way you've written Cameron. I can really believe that the actual character feels this way - especially the part where she isn't even sure if she could fight for him. Secondly, I loved the style of writing - in particular the way you were straight to the point, without resorting to three chapters to sum up Cameron's feelings. And there, that is possibly my longest review ever, but at least I'm trying harder now :) Michelle C |
| tranquil-eyes 2005-08-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseExcellent story! You've captured Cameron very well I think, especially pertaining to House. Just a couple of nitpicks on spelling like 'confident' instead of 'confidant' but all in all, this was a great effort for a first. |
| Teenwitch 2005-08-05 ch 1, | abuseYou have no idea how excited I was to see you had written a House fic. I understand the temptation, believe me. This was perfection. Cameron's voice was so unbelievably real and accurate I am completely jealous. I adored this small character piece. |
| hazelmom 2005-08-05 ch 1, | abuseVery nice piece. I like that you fleshed out Cameron's past so nicely. sheila |
| CSI-FanForLife 2005-08-05 ch 1, | abuseYou did a GREAT job with this story :) I wouldn't say that it was your first House fic, really. I am very new to the House M.D. fanfic. You just described Cameron just like the person she is... a warm beautiful person, not only from the outside, but inside as well... ~Willeke |
| mossley 2005-08-05 ch 1, | abuseLovely look into Cameron. Hope to see more from you. :D |
| Nessa Owen 2005-08-05 ch 1, | abuseWhat a treat for me this morning! I think you captured Cameron beautifully, in my opinion. The thoughts in her head are what I had imagined myself for her. Well done. Thanks. |