nice.

Okay I like this time travel story, it's got potential and it seems like it has new ideas with Harry biding his time and the Boggart and how DD assumes that Harry is a Seer. Trelawney being all friendly with him is really funny. Harry's way of dealing with Malfoy is very good and I like seeing mature Harry, who still lashes out sometimes, but acts better. Also him blurting out about Sirius being innocent was great and Harry's plan to use Fudge to free Sirius was brilliant!
A few comments, for book titles (and fanfic titles actually) you use capital letters for every word apart from 'the', 'a' and 'and'. Good job on the Italics for the book titles though. Also when a new person starts speaking, new line. It's stops the big blocks of text which are really off-putting to read, if all the chapters had been like that I probably wouldn't have read it no matter how good the actual writing was. I would recommend clearing those up, it will make it more visually appealing to the readers.
Good story, a plot that has been used before with some original ideas of how some situations should be handled.

He kills a dementor and no one cares? Some pretty big plot holes, don't you think?

write on

this story is awsome, best time travel story I've read up to this point

I am off looking for the mentioned sequel ;)
Love it!

Humorous...
Good story

cool story! i look forward to the sequel!

One of the best time-travel fics I`ve ever read!

Excellent story, excellent characterizations, excellent plot.

I noticed mistakes throughout in capitalization of proper nouns, some minor spelling errors, and some other grammar and punctuation. You may want to consider either reviewing the entire story yourself or acquiring a beta reader to check it for basic mistakes. They were just a bit distracting from the content, but on the whole, your story is worthwhile.

I like this story alright ^^

I'm just a litle scared about what'll happen next. I'm not sure I want to know more. What if someone I like die Or if somethink goes all wrong? Well I'll go see if the sequel is up and try the first chapters.

I really wouldn't mind Harry to be with a boy at the end, just to see him tortured by his friends remembering the long past time where he was in denial lol. (Well I also love slash but it doesn't count ^^)

Oh, Oh, Oh, Oh; Great!
This fic is just WAY to cool for me to not review.
I really enjoy the do-over fics - they're always so much fun - but this time I think I have found one that has topped them all. Not too long, not too short, and with a sequel, or at least a promised one. If when I pinched myself and it didnt hurt made me realize otherwise, I would be thinking that I was dreaming or in heaven or something.
Well, thanks; this was great.
I'll go hunting for the sequel now.

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