Well, that story definitely is my favorite one(;

Ohh,it's really romantic!!

One of my favorite chapters!

It was really romantic but after that...

ILOVE YOUR STORY! MAKE A SEQUEL PLEASE!

wel...ah first off i thought it was great i mean whho am i to judge when i cant even write fiction for (scuse my french) ** but uh the only thing is im a julia fan and the idea of her leaving jin wasnt dat great but the fact that she dumped him was AWESME...neva thought id be reading tekken fiction but it ws real good what can i say you definitely caught my attention. 9.5/10 (.5 taken off juss cus i like julia better)

So sweet, but though a taste of sadness. A really stunning rose this story!

aww.. how cute..
but Jin's mind is so.. topsy turvy.. =P heh..
nevertheless the story is nice..^^ keep up the good work..^^

omg im crying! thats so so sad... aw

Aw this is really really really really really really saddening! ...

Aww bless, what a sweet story, who knew that Jin could be such a romantic? lol. *goes to read the sequel*

I love this story...this chapter...everything...Anyway I hope you make more storys...cuz Yourr so good at it...hehe...keep up the awesome work..

hey
ur really writer
all of ur chapters are so exciting !1

Ogmigod!So nice !!GOOD LUCK !
i even cried when i seen your new review!
REviews PLss!!

NO!make it quick please!