I hope you write more to this story.

wow.. thats pretty good /me wants more )

Hey, You need to continue this! - Make a sequel please! Pwetty pwease? Or I'll bug you online so P And don't think I wont! I want more! More! I'll also continue to haunt your guestbook if you don't BWUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA For I am the Guestbook fairy! BWUAHAHAHAHA!... or... I've regained my sanity... just write more k?

Not bad for the first chapter. And don't let critism get you down. Anyway when's the next chapter coming out? I really would like to find out what happens next. Oh and thanks so much for reviewing Cye's Struggle for me. I'm thinking of a sequel for it. Good luck with your story!

This is the stupidest story I've ever seen! It's badly written and the idea is dumb. Please try to do better.

Great story! Like the Sailor Torrent idea, Sarah! I wish I could write like that...Are u going to continue it?