oh please continue this is avery good start to an amazing thind please make it more than just a oneshot please im begging on my knees please;]

More, please. Kissing is just the start, followed by exploration, exctacy and the ultimate pleasure. It's best when you learn from someone you love.

hey u should write a sequel 2 this. pretty please with a cherry on top.please email ur answer

Ya but as twisted as it is i like Twisted!
Got some more??
~Crystal

hey! i heart ur fic ! plz continue !iwould luv 2 c wat happens! u r also an amazing writer keep up the awesome work but maybe a little more rated M *raises eyebrow suggestivly* :) :) :) :) :)

please continue

This is so awesome, would love for you to make a sequel.
Adding this one to my favorite's
X Denise

that was great. you should do a sequel.
not sure why it's under M, it's a T at most.

That was so hot and cute. IT was like innocent incest =. I loved it!

omg! this was so good! I never thought I'd like these 2 together, but now I like them better than any one else in the movie lol. totally going in my favorites!! love it!!
xoxo Jenna

dude please make a sequel!

please make this a chapter one i loved it so much!

please make this a chapter fanfic! it was so good!!

great story! such amazing visuals, I could really picture jacob smith's hands exploring alyson stoners body

Twisted? Yes...but wonderfully written and amazing as well. Loved it...oddly enough. inspires somewhat, even.