That was brilliant. I loved the way you managed to fix the Due South ep into an Atlantis story.

Loved it.

Great story! Loved the characterization of both John and Rodney a lot! It really sounds like something they could actually pull off on the show. You've got a wonderful way of describing what's going on around them, like sounds and visuals! Liked all your Atlantis stories, hope you keep writing many more!

I must say, I have never seen the original (never even heard of that particular show...) but it makes me want to see it!

And I did. Really well done!

Oh, yes enjoyed it very much! Loved how Rodney and John did the sing-along thing! That was great! And Rodney turning into Clint Eastwood and goes after Dave with both guns blazing, that was just great! Thanks for the story, hope to see more from you!

Aw, that was absolutely wonderful! THANK SOO MUCH!

That was wonderful! I really like how they both admitted to their "fathers" but not really to each other, how much they like each other. And I felt so sorry for Rodney having to carry John, my own muscles hurt!

WOW! Great job! The characters were so...right. The whole story flows so well. Superb interaction between Sheppard and McKay. I think I want to read it again.

ggrreat conclusion, mate! talkie & very very good! & i can't wait to see more from you...& hopefully that time will come SOON. :)

- a fan of your work

& a fellow writer,

Sharma:)

North

What what... you cruel person you, leaving off there :P I haven't seen this episode of DS (although I'm pretty sure I know which one you're talking about), but it fits the situation so well. The scene at the beginning fits real well, setting up the rest of the action. McKay the Boy Scout... something about that image just doesn't seem to fit ;) I guess I'll just be patient and wait for you to update.

HAHAHA! The singing is AWESOME! OMG! Funniest thing i've ever read! That was awesome! Great job! Great story! Hehehehe! All the bickering will never get old!

I really enjoyed this story. I love John and Rodney and the bantering between them was wonderful. You did a great job. Hope you write more stories soon.

This is brilliant.

It was one of my favourite Due South episodes and you've done a great job changing it for Atlantis.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Great suspense! - go Rodney! - love John's POV - love the way you started at the end of the chapter first, really great to read!

*giggle-snort*

Here I am, reading this and having the "Due South" episode flash through my head the whole time, and it doesn't occur to me that you did that on purpose until I went back and re-read the title. Silly me for not reading the header. *g*

More please!

So-o-o-o-o good. Great interaction between Sheppard and McKay. Very true to character. Hurry up and write more because I am axiously awaiting.