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| Cerberusx 2008-07-15 ch 15,  | abuseOh a flash back. |
| Cerberusx 2008-07-15 ch 14, | abuseIntersting |
| Cerberusx 2008-07-15 ch 13, | abuseNice I like it. |
| Cerberusx 2008-07-15 ch 1, | abusevery good |
| AlphaFoxAttackSquadron 2008-07-10 ch 20, | abuseGreat story! Though i did suspect Robert being Kyle... or is it Fred? ah who cares... The ending is missing something. But i don't know what it is. So from lack of anything else to add... I enjoyed reading this. |
| AlphaFoxAttackSquadron 2008-07-10 ch 10, | abuseMeh... The Hayes and Taxi thing would have been infinity times better with some description of the gore. Like the blood stained the bricks, or his organs were slowly spitting out, perhaps the look in his face or his glazed eyes. I need a mental picture here! Stand and deliver! ...or sit down, type, and then deliver. That works too... |
| AlphaFoxAttackSquadron 2008-07-10 ch 5, | abuseHah. You earned my respect. Too much time on my hands, is in fact, one helluva awesome song. This story is very interesting. It goes in depth on Inspector Fox. Personality one of my favourite characters in the Sly Cooper series. You write awesome. |
| Hermione12124 2008-02-16 ch 14, | abuseOh, jeese. I didn't think it was going to be him, but I did consider it a possibility... but I really hope the Chief isn't. Anyway, this story has got my attention... and not too many do that. Keep writing! ;o) |
| Hermione12124 2008-02-16 ch 10, | abuseOkay... my suspect has been proven innocent - he was Hayes... but still, good job. This story is well written. I can't wait to read the rest of it. Keep writing! ;o) |
| Hermione12124 2008-02-16 ch 9, | abuseThis has been a great story so far; I like the plot and the characters, and they are, for the most part, very canon. And I think I know who the stalker is... I just can't wait to see if I'm right. Good job! |
| Rosa Cooper 2006-06-02 ch 20, | abuseOh!! Brilliant story! Absoloutely AWESOME! What else can I say, it's perfect! A new story, and suprising twists that make it a thrilling story!! Until next time, :)! |
| GERHDFGN 2006-03-22 ch 18, | abuseAH SLY GOT SHOT! this si so amazin, soz this sin't long but i have to finish it, sly has to be alright, he just has to be. . . . . luv Faina |
| GERHDFGN 2006-03-08 ch 1, | abusethis looks amazing keep goi with the second one |
| Chibi Flor 2006-02-11 ch 1, | abuseWow . . . What can you say, but holy crap! It was an prefect tale of a diseased mind. You had me on the edge of my seat the whole time. Hopefully, I will be able to write a story as good as this one, wish me luck! |
| CocoaMoo Vamp. 2005-11-16 ch 3, | abuseHey! This is great! Sorry I didn't review in the first two chapters... In the first chapter, you had put "to tell", I think it was, two times, then the rest of the sentence. ... Anyway; I like this fic! {adds to story and author to favs}. I saw your name in a comment/reivew from the authoress on one of the other Sly Cooper fanfics...which one it was escapes me at the moment -lol-. -Keep up the great work! Ttfn! |