 Daniel Robles 2007-06-09 . chapter 2 please |
 katara4ever 2007-02-07 . chapter 10 how could lanera's mother be the chief when the northern tribe had the customs they had? just curious. |
 Zuko_fan 2006-11-11 . chapter 6 Thought I'd write another review, last time I was anonymous, but whatever. You're writing is really good and I like you're character Lenara. She fits very well into the story. I can't wait to read the rest! |
 anonymous 2006-11-11 . chapter 4 Great story so far. You're doing a really good job of keeping Zuko's character. A lot of people make him out to be much kinder and emotional than he actually is. He's short-tempered and has a rather cool personality. I like how you write his character, making him not evil but not a real pleasant person either. Keep up the good work! (as you can tell, Zuko is my favorite character) |
 Lang 2006-05-14 . chapter 10 This story was good you should write a sequal |
 ANIM3LOVA835 or Emily 2006-01-01 . chapter 10 I love your story! Are you finished? I wanna know the plan. Will zuko and her be ttogether? So many questions. LOL k keep writing! |
 Skyflake Roses 2005-11-12 . chapter 10Please wright more.Don't make me beg you lol. |
 avatarfan4evur 2005-10-15 . chapter 10 Wow, your story makes me want to cry! Your a really good writer! plz keep going! *gives you puppy dog pout* plz? *whimpers* |
 ArielFan4ever 2005-10-09 . chapter 10Hey there! Sadira here. I hope you're doing well. I just read the first ten chapters of your avatar: The Last Airbender story. I really enjoyed it. Please write more. Katara is my favorite character and you write her really well! I also like Lenora!
May the power of water be with you always
Sadira |
 Musogato 2005-09-15 . chapter 10I like this story. Lenara is a wise and clever character, which is always a wonderful addition to any story, and the other characters were well-writen too. Although it did feel like Aang-tachi got the shaft for the most part in this book. Still, it's refreshing to find a fic where you want to keep reading, and where you're not quite sure what's going to happen next. All in all, wonderful job. ^_^ |
 lilaries91 2005-09-04 . chapter 3I loved the end of chapter two, it made me chuckle to myself. Exellent so far. I can gladly say that your characters are well written and not out of character--so far anyways. Keep in mind though, that i've only finished chapter two.
This is a rare story that's keeping me reading on. So give yourself a pat on the back, and have a cookie...lol. |
 SarahNev 2005-08-06 . chapter 10Oh, congrats on getting your story up! ^_^ I'll add it to my site now. But why have you disabled Anonymous Reviews? You would probably get more reviews if you didn't do that. |