 KarleyBoB 2006-12-30 . chapter 1Kewl i acctually enjoyed this but it was extremely short |
 Julia Poprocks 2005-11-27 . chapter 1Oh my...I love it!
Its perfectly balanced so it doesn't feel like you're trying to push a shipping on anybody, its just friendship, as it should be.
I mean, I think Sissy could bring a lot to their team, I seriously wanna see her go on Lyoko. XD That would be awesome! lol
Anyway, great job! It was very descriptive and extremely real - I think almost anyone could, at least at one time, relate with the situation and it ended gracefully. ^^
Beautiful! heh
*hug* |
 the-green-rose 2005-11-18 . chapter 1This is nice! I can tell you put a lot of thought into it. |
 RoDrInCuBuS 2005-09-19 . chapter 1Nice story, Ray... loved the ending.. too bad it's just a one-shot fic... would had loved to see what would have been with them. |
 amai-chestnut 2005-08-10 . chapter 1OH cool. She really has changed. She sounds sincere, so that's good. Great job! |
 angelforshow 2005-08-07 . chapter 1Aww...it's nice that Sissi changed...not bad, even though I still despise her. xP |
 Becks101 2005-08-07 . chapter 1glad to see sissy has changed.good job! |
 CASE iN POiNT 2005-08-05 . chapter 1Aw. Wow. I was just about to type "please continue" but then I remembered it was an one-shot. But now as I type this review, I realize that I like it better than a one-shot. To me, writing is all about the power you put into your piece. You chose the right words, the right syntax, the right tone, the right everything. And if you do it right, you craft a beautiful POWERFUL piece. This is one such piece. As a one-shot, it is so much more powerful than if you had continued, and possibly even killed, the wonder of your words. Thank you for writing this. |
 SamBlob 2005-08-05 . chapter 1Good beginning. It will be interesting to see where this goes.
Who are "you guys", though? Only Ulrich and Sissy speak and no-one else is mentioned. Are we to assume that all of Team Lyoko is there, and would that include Aelita or not?
(...and if it is Team Lyoko, what are their jobs, exactly? Must be very flexible if they can get time off to fight XANA... ;D ) |
 Linii-chan 2005-08-05 . chapter 1Hahaha! Wow, I'm glad to see that our little debate inspired a piece of fanfiction! =p
Silliness aside, you did a great job with this. It wasn't Ulrich/Sissi fluff and it didn't have to be, it came out perfectly just the way you did it. Very nice. =)
Linii-chan ~* |