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Faith-chan
2006-02-14 . chapter 2
Loved both versions! Kick-** tag!
Silverthreads
2005-10-02 . chapter 2
Both versions are good. The second, Radek's POV might have just a little more strength, given his ending thought.
ChristalSteele
2005-09-14 . chapter 2
A very good Tag and an interesting take on it.
Mercury's Winter
2005-09-06 . chapter 2
Aww, the last line of the second story was so sad :( loved them both :D Kinda forgot about poor Radek getting smacked when Ford took off, glad you remembered for me! :D
krysalys
2005-08-31 . chapter 2
Excellent, from BOTH POV's.
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Krys, the Queen of Procrastination
Fanwoman
2005-08-19 . chapter 2
Quite the zinger at the end, there! I like how this dealt with the question of why would Ford knock out Zelenka if he's not going to take the same jumper?

As much as I liked this, I think I liked the first better. There was something about the worry in Rodney I liked that was missing in this one. The comedic bits didn't make up for it, given this was a fairly serious fic. Thank you for both!
Fanwoman
2005-08-19 . chapter 1
That was awsome. On to Zelenka!
fififolle
2005-08-19 . chapter 1
Thank You! I was trying to write this exact scene but failing miserably - watched Siege 3 again last week and - hey, did you see what Ford did to Radek??!! Didn't anyone else notice? So thank you, I'll stop trying now, this does it for me. Bless that poor Czech.
devianttart
2005-08-12 . chapter 2
2 is my fav. But that could be b/c I have such a crush on Zalinka he makes me giggle...
I liked this.
dunebuggy
2005-08-11 . chapter 2
gotta tell you, I like the first version better. Can't read the stories that are all in first person reality anymore. There are too many of them and it makes me sad.
NotTasha
2005-08-09 . chapter 1
Gotta say, I prefer the 3rd Person POV version. The perspective just works so much better in this story. Stay with the 3rdPOV! You do such a wonderful job with it. Love this story. Love Zelenka.
drufan
2005-08-08 . chapter 1
I really preferred Radek's version due to his insight. Both were good though.
kate98
2005-08-06 . chapter 2
I vote for the first one. 1st person is very hard to pull off with a character like Zelenka, whose speech patterns (and, one would presume, internal dialogue) are so unique. I really enjoyed the 3rd person version.
DarthTofu
2005-08-06 . chapter 2
Liked the first one betterm, but still pretty good. I'm just not a first-person type.
DarthTofu
2005-08-06 . chapter 1
Woah! El Goodio de storio! That my version of Spanish for "The good story" in case you couldn't understand. Bit of a weak start with "Rodney entered the command that would de-activate the cloaking device" (Seemed a bit acward) but all in all, you got every character down perfectly, and did a great job on this fic. I'm going to go read the rest, now. by the way, awesome writing style!
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