   lateBloomer04 2006-07-05 . chapter 1Aw that was cute! I |
 Brian 2005-09-25 . chapter 1 Very nice, compact storyline. A little short on details such as what happene to Lois and why but a nice short story overall.
This could be the start of a series of vignettes that answer the above questions... |
 The Noble French Fry 2005-08-14 . chapter 1Very nice, albeit short. |
| smallvillegurl 2005-08-12 . chapter 1 cute |
 hope master 2005-08-11 . chapter 1that was hot man keep going |
| Transylvanian 2005-08-08 . chapter 1 What about an ambulance? Good story. |
| LeeDej 2005-08-07 . chapter 1 Nice work. Liked it very much. |
| smallvillegirl1 2005-08-07 . chapter 1 Oh,I loved it! You did an awesome job! |
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