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| OrigamiGirl 2008-07-24 ch 1, | abuseThat made me ball my eyes out but it was beautifully written. Good job! |
| oreoxlove4ever 2008-07-17 ch 1, | abuse...speechless love it |
| Koinu-chan 2008-07-08 ch 1, | abuseThat was lovely~ I really like the writing style, its so straightforward and powerful. I personally love analyzing Sasuke, he's a tough one to write. I think you did a good job though. I could really the emotions behind it. |
| garaXxXhinata69 2008-07-06 ch 1, | abuseepic |
| miz mizery 2008-06-19 ch 1, | abusei realize that this is three years after blood equals thicker is written, but i dont care if you still read reviews on this or not. im gonna write one, because you sure as hell deserve one. that last episode where sasuke beats naruto's **, its heartwrenching and i could never come up with very good words to describe it. this is better than just good words. if i were to write this, i wouldve screwed it up so bad it wasnt funny. so i may sound like im sucking up or kissing ** or whatever. but it was really good, and one of the only good things ive read about the actual anime in a long time. |
| anonymous 2008-06-05 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was amazing., it was moving and powerful., and sasuke stayed in character all throughout., keep up the good work! |
| Innocent Innuendo 2008-05-28 ch 1, | abuseamazing! :D great character study |
| chibibble 2008-05-28 ch 1, | abuseThis is a beautiful, powerful fiction, and I commend you for it. You've captured Sasuke so well, because his thought process and oh gosh, it's wonderful. I love, most of all, the way you describe Sasuke saying that Naruto and Sakura belong to him. The lines that stood out for me were: 'Ghosts who list their names over and over, and how they died, and in what order, and who died quickly and painlessly and who lingered. Ghosts who whisper Itachi’s name over and over into Sasuke’s ear, until whenever the wind blows that name is all he hears.' It's such a good way of writing it. I think you'd write a good insane!Sasuke. It ends on this perfectly bitter note, which leaves us with an aftertaste in our mouths. All in all, great job! |
| blindyourears 2008-05-27 ch 1, | abuseThat was beautiful. It's been a while since something I read actually made me cry. Wonderful. |
| gryphonic medli 2008-05-27 ch 1, | abuseum, wow. normally i'm not too fond of reflection stories and things like this(even though i wrote one. heh.) but this was amazing! it was deep and in character and just... wow! i really loved it! |
| Laurkan 2008-05-22 ch 1, | abuseLove this story !! Il leaves us with a lingering feeling of bittersweet. Thanks ^^ |
| Solitary Fatalist 2008-05-21 ch 1, | abuseThis is probably the best fic I've read.. |
| Valentine Satiguss 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseAmazing. Wow. It's just... freaking amazing. |
| cutecrazyice 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE THIS! I really, really do. I like how Sasuke was written, because you captured his personality point on. Oh, the pain and confusion he feels...and the sadness...wow. Great. Really great. Good job! :) |
| acrobat 2008-04-19 ch 1, anon. | abusei thought this piece of work was brilliant. however, i think in sasuke's heart kakashi will have more weight than sakura. i don't really think sakura is as important to sasuke as kakashi. her love for sasuke is undeniably moving but blind. i feel that a person as determined as sasuke, he acknowledges people that have an aim in life (like himself). he will not perceive sakura an equal to naruto, because her 'love' for sasuke was superficial (sasuke never treated her well) and she was willing to give up her village for this superficial 'love'. kakashi would have higher place to sasuke because they are too similar. having lost all precious people in their lives, they could easily relate to each other. however, the fact that he's got obito's legacy, is enough for sasuke to despise him. (a similar love hate relationship with naruto and itachi) sorry for the rant. anyhow marvellous piece. |