|Reviews for You can't make me|
| Rotem 8/12/05 . chapter 6
soo mean *sniff* leavin a cliffie like that
I guess ill have too wait then keep writ plz hurry i wanna kno wat wrong w/warren :)
your an awsome writer btw:)
| JanFL 8/12/05 . chapter 6
YOU EVIL PERSON! EVIL CLIFFHANGER! please update? please? *puppy eyes* soon?
| JanFL 8/12/05 . chapter 3
omg I LOVE THAT POEM er song whateer it is. I read it online and I turned it into a song anyways. Well I like this chap
| JanFL 8/12/05 . chapter 1
wow that poem was deep, i like it!
| MovieDorkShowSpork 8/11/05 . chapter 6
And... WARREN IS SUICIDAL.
MY POOR BABY! XD
| MovieDorkShowSpork 8/10/05 . chapter 5
THE BETA PLAYS KRIS- lol. I LOVE THIS CHAPPY- BUT I SERIOUSLYY HOPES THAT SHE GETS A POWER-!
| DallyJacklover 8/10/05 . chapter 4
update update please i just saw Sky High and this is my first story i have read about it and now i am hooked!
| Star AJT 84 8/10/05 . chapter 4
My goodness! She had it hard!
| Lt. Commander Richie 8/10/05 . chapter 4
i LIKE IT! Keep going, its good!
| hYpErsOmniAc 8/9/05 . chapter 4
ah i love it. very unique. this is the first sky high fanfiction i've reviewed mainly because i didn't think any of the others deserved a review. keep up the good work
| MovieDorkShowSpork 8/9/05 . chapter 4
NOW BECAUSE I SAID TO! BWAHAHAHAHAHA
| rootbeergirl19 8/8/05 . chapter 3
i really love your story! and dont worry 'bout the spelling, its ok.
dyslexics of the world untie! ;P
| Suntiger 8/7/05 . chapter 2
I'm gonna send you what people would call a flamer, but this isn't a flame. I just wanted to help you so you could become a better writer. First of all, you might wanna check your grammar. I keep noticing some missing periods and commas. Like after they're talking.
"Table three K, alright! Try not to spill anything," She said (and blah blah). But there's a comma. Also, when you say "Alright" it's supposed to be "All right."
You should double check if you're spelling is correct too. Another thing is that you should captilize when you start a new conversation.
“I’ll have the same as Will” said the blond
“Me as well, but with ketchup” the gothic girl said
“and you?” Rosethorn asked the other boy,
The M in "Me too." The A in "and you".
One more thing that I wanted to remind you. For your second chapter, you have the same thing as the first chapter. You must have mistaken it for the first. _;;
Like I said, I only want to help not critize. I actually enjoyed this story and hope you continue it. You kept the characters in check instead of making them OOC (out of character), which tends to get on my nerves when people make them OOC.
Anyhow, update soon!
| Stranded 8/7/05 . chapter 2
Um, okay. You probably had some technical difficulties because this is the exact same chapter as your first one. However, I enjoyed your other chapter and am looking forward to the next. You may want to work on your spelling because many words are missing letters or just not there at all.
| krobles8930 8/6/05 . chapter 1
Nice! Its a very cute story. I hope you update on it. I would love to read more.