Most lovely! In a short poem fic, you summed up their relationship. I could never do that, congrats!

loved this poem.. :)

That was such an awsome poem!

I love it, it is is really good. Keep on writing.

Incredible, I love it! This is so beautiful and the language is so evocative. I can feel the cresendo rising only to die away. A wonderful piece of poetry and a very heartwrenching work. Please give us more