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ingridmr 2008-02-26 ch 7,	abuseWow. You just went and changed the whole series by changing just one event. Like I said, wow. I do like your Narcissa, supposedly helpless but incredible devious and clever. This story was so cool, one of the better AU stories I have read. Thanx for the great read!
Malin 2008-01-31 ch 7, anon.	abuseThis fic just made me so happy. There is really no more I can say, happiness is lovely! Thank you!
ohhhdear 2008-01-18 ch 7, anon.	abuseI really enjoy the AU "what if?" genre. Your dialogue is so believable. Thanks.
trekker2002 2007-10-05 ch 1,	abuseA sensible course for Snape to take and it certainly changed the timeline. I would really like more to see how you would develop this timeline through Harry's schooldays.
Phytonesse 2007-07-05 ch 7,	abuseI love your stories, I´ve read 3 so far, Accountable, Survivors, and Expidence. I think you are a great writer. I love the fact thet you make the plots belivable and allways give an epilogy that makes you feel that the characters are going to be all right. Zirateb.
rekrula 2007-06-20 ch 3,	abuseWow! What a page-turner. I sitting on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens. You write a terrific mystery!
Morwen Tindomerel 2007-03-07 ch 7,	abuseWow. Harry, Ron, Neville and Draco all brought up together as friends - what a concept. I would guess Harry's been raised by Sirius, and maybe a Mrs. Sirius? Neville's obviously kept his parents and gained in confidence and Draco's been raised by Snape not Lucius...hm. Somehow I can't see SS as ever being warm and cuddly however happily married he may be on the other hand both Harry and Neville will be used to his acidic remarks from near babyhood and not particularly upset by them.
Aldara 2007-01-30 ch 7, anon.	abuseOh, what a cute ending! That just screams for a sequel! g Apart from that, it's very interesting how the story turned out. Hm, how much a dead person can change everything...
wishful thoughts 2007-01-20 ch 7,	abuseoh so cool!
cimmer 2006-12-17 ch 7,	abuseWhat a sweet story. I adored your Narcissa and what a change it made to everyone's lives when she took her fate in hand. Thanks
a fan 2006-11-27 ch 7, anon.	abuseAs I wait for Accountable to be updated I feel compelled to revisit this, one of my favorite fics. (Well I love the Jane Eyre scene in Survivors too) I just like this Snape/Narcissa pairing. I think my favorite moment is her casual revelation that Pettigrew was the traitor not Sirius and Snape's admission that he wanted Sirius to be guilty. So many people(anti snape people) treat Snape in POA as if he should have known who the real traitor was and was deliberately trying to get an innocent man killed. While I don't think Snape ever considers Sirius innocent after the werewolf incident however the details may be, I like to think he didn't know. Anyway, I like the aftermath of Narcissa's careless words including her offer to help Snape get revenge. I also like the idea of Harry and Draco and Neville and Ron growing up friends (part of the reason I like the Stealing Harry/Lacoan's Children stories so much) I do wish we could have seen a bit more (Sirius and Narcissa - he must have been grateful and irritated both) Tonks, how Snape would have dealt with Quirrelmort, Pettigrew - how quickly would he be discovered? Anyway, going back to reread until new Accountable is posted.
MollysSister 2006-11-22 ch 7,	abuseSo is this an ongoing story? I just adore the way you have changed cannon to reflect the SS/NM relationship. It was also fun to dive into the NM character and learn more about her. I am tickled that the boys are all friends. Did Snape ever have children with NM? I have so many questions! Well done
Arsinoe de Blassenville 2006-10-25 ch 7,	abuseLovely story. Charming AU, and very well-written.
Elyse3 2006-08-24 ch 7, anon.	abuseThat was an enchanting AU. At times, I'd wished you'd fleshed the story out more, but I very much liked the way you interpreted Narcissa, et all. You have some very lovely descriptions, and yor dialogue flows remarkably smoothly. Kudos on a job well done.
Iva1201 2006-08-13 ch 7,	abuseWell, definitely AU but definitely sweet. I loved the ending. Not too much - e.g. Snape and Narcissa holding hands, carrying around two other babies and waving at Draco. NO, just a possibility how it could have been if... Nice. But maybe you could fix spelling of horcruxes, what do you think? (-: Also added to C2 Severus Snape where I am staff. (-:

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