i luved it

Why not finish? It's a great story as of yet, though it could stand to have some sort of marking distinguishing between different times/speakers. I know you don't agree with the pairings you wrote, but there are a buttload of H/G fans out there who'll be mad if you don't finish because of how well you're writing it.

Just a couple comments besides that:
1) Hermione's not that daft. She'd suspect something after 4 months or so.
2) I think you're a little unrealistic with the amount of money. Yeah, though 50K pounds is a lot of money, it wouldn't last 3 people a year of traveling, let alone leaving 18K.

Great story!

even if you dont like hphg you should continue this, very hot and racey

Libidinous

are you going to have Harry marry both Hermione ang Gen, and both be o.k. with it. Is Ron cheating on Hermione. that bad.