|Reviews for Distant|
| Jasmine Mae 10/26/06 . chapter 1
| GrayRobes 10/3/06 . chapter 1
Okay...if you must give us aside information in a piece, please make sure it is SEPARATE from the poem. I got really confused. Also note: in your poem description, you misspelled "prophecy." Yet you got it right here.
I htink you give Rhapsody too much insight into Ashe; she simply did not know that much of him in Prophecy. Maybe in the beginning of Destiny you could have conceivably done this...
| Arilyn 11/17/05 . chapter 1
Really good poem. you captured their love of each other very well.
| Spaz913 8/7/05 . chapter 1
Aw! That's so cute! Super kawaii! - I think it would get more notice in the Rhapsody Trilogy category though.
| Fritz 8/7/05 . chapter 1
Wow, that was really neat!