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| SiniseLuvr 2006-03-06 ch 1,  | abuseOh wow... all of these stories about 9/11 are so beautiful and tragic... good job... |
| rebecca hampton 2005-11-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseaw that was so sad |
| goddessmaat 2005-08-23 ch 1, | abuselovely story - great timineline too |
| Bloodsuckers37 2005-08-21 ch 1, | abuseIt felt a little "forced" and "rushed," compared to some of your other stories. Also, I would try to vary up the saids and the askeds, etc. For awhile there, that was a little rough and it drew away from the story. I also felt that this could have used some more description...it felt a little jumpy. The premise was excellent though. |
| Bitten By The Wolf 2005-08-07 ch 1, | abuseThat was good! Absolutely crushing, but good. >< Poor Mac. I wanna give him a hug -grins- Keep writing! You're doin' great! -Gray |
| fruitbat00 2005-08-07 ch 1, | abuseNice story. You managed to get quite a bit of emotion in there. You feel so heartbroken for Mac. Hope your going to write more CSI NY. |
| Loopey-Laura 2005-08-07 ch 1, | abuseaww, that's really sweet. |
| D. Lerious 2005-08-06 ch 1, | abusepoor mac!:(:( Very well done and I liked the flashback aspect:) |