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| bob 2008-09-21 ch 7, anon. | abuseIts MiCHIru not Micharu. |
| Chris ShadowMoon 2008-06-26 ch 7,  | abusevery good, and it's so sad you stopped. I want to see more if you could, it's a great story |
| peter 2008-02-21 ch 7, anon. | abuseit is a good story and wonder what happens next after haraku calls setsuna. |
| jupitersthunder 2008-02-05 ch 7, | abuseThis is one great story ya got. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I hope it all works out for Ranma. |
| Chinangel 2008-01-19 ch 7, | abuseHey hun, um...are you going to be finishing this? Or do I need to send out a hostile email? :P |
| Katyfoxdemon2 2007-10-28 ch 7, | abuseI found this fic looking for a good ranma fic and was amazed by how good the story line is. DO you think this will ever be finished or have you given up on it? If You have given up on it Do you think i could use some of the idea you had and embellishing on it a bit? Thanks |
| Jade 2007-06-15 ch 7, anon. | abuseI would agree if it hasn't been more then 5 years sense this last part was added. You've done a wonderful job in the story so far. It just sucks that you haven't added anything to it for so long. I want to read more again and soon Please! |
| Vilkath 2007-05-10 ch 7, | abuseNot a bad idea, although I can't say I agree with some the finer points. By the chaos curse explination Ranma should just as likely have good things happen to him as bad. Yet it would seem his past life was entirely horrible chaos. This theory sort of carried over into Ranma new life, always winning in the end by obscure chances. Only real problem with that is, Ranma's life was chaos even before he fell into the pool. I also never really liked SM/Ranma were he is locked stories. It can happen, but I hope for a better reason then Taro showing up with te ladle.. ryoga just finding it and using it on Ranma. I have always felt the need for people to lock Ranma's curse in SM stories is just cruel, his life is bad enough, without the last thing forcibly taken away from him. Especialy stories like this, where the people who wrong him get no real punishment. Did ranma lock Ryoga as a pig? Did he lock Taro as a monster so he couldn't talk etc. I have always felt the little pounding Ranma does to his opents that threaten him so greatly is total BS, and why they keep coming back. Oh well, Not a bad idea but since this fic is 5 years dead I don't expect much from it. |
| Taeniaea 2007-03-22 ch 7, | abuseI Love The Chapter:7 Plz Plz Update It Soon!! |
| P.H. Wise 2006-12-31 ch 7, | abuseThe idea is sound but the execution feels rushed. This could become a really awesome story. It just needs some revision, and possibly the assistance of a beta reader. Although considering that it hasn't been updated since 2002, this is probably coming far too late to do any good. |
| Tuisto 2006-10-31 ch 7, | abusefor a Ranma Sailor Moon cross, it certainly is different from what is so oft found. Might be interesting to see it continued. |
| peter 2006-08-12 ch 7, anon. | abuseit is a good story to and what happens after ranko remembers that pluto is her sister. the computer on pluto sent the information to ranko and how different will she be after receiving that information about the last l,0 years. please write more on this story it is good to read. |
| Sora Moto 2006-08-01 ch 7, | abuseIts not fair to leave it hanging like that. Please update I like your story. |
| iceland 2006-04-06 ch 7, | abuseit is a good story to read and wonder when the new chapter will be ready or what will happen next to ranko. |
| Nodregah 2005-12-06 ch 7, | abuseYou aint gonna do it, but an update would be nice. |