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| Spelbound 2008-03-21 ch 1,  | abuseAww...how cute. And Sad. Very well written! You captured all thier personalities perfectly! ^^ -Spelbound |
| uchihakiriko 2008-01-24 ch 1, | abuseoh... I always feel bad for Orihime and end up pairing her wit someone else. XDD ICHIRUKI FOREVER! |
| kitkat 2008-01-05 ch 1, anon. | abusepoor orihime - but ichiruki rules! |
| Lost in Green 2007-08-24 ch 1, | abuseFeel sad for Orihime, but whatever...IchiRuki is the best!! |
| Sagishi 2007-05-11 ch 1, | abuseAww, how bittersweet! First off, I wanna say that your writing is great. Nice use of words, no silly mistakes that take away from the effect of the piece. Next, I like the fact that you wrote it from Orihime's point of view. Not only did that give the reader an insight into how Ichigo changed when Rukia left- from the point of view of someone who's not fully involved- but it gave you a chance to portray Orihime as having depth and intelligence, instead of just making her a ditzy schoolgirl with an immature crush. And of course, the IchiRuki fangirl in me just had to squeal at the last scene when Rukia came back. So cute XD |
| Edge_Keen Blade 2007-01-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseThanks to Orihime, Rukia and Ichigo are back together! |
| Mayvis 2007-01-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseSo bittersweet. But it was beautiful. Nice job! |
| honey-vanilla11 2006-12-09 ch 1, | abusethat was so bittersweet!! i do love Orihime's devotion to Ichigo! but i also love Ichigo and Rukia being together! the concept of a wish bringing them all together was too sweet! keep it up! |
| Tsukky 2006-12-08 ch 1, | abuseThis story is awesome. x3 -Tsukia-chan x3 |
| BelleDayNight 2006-11-06 ch 1, | abuseVery sweet...bitter sweet that is! I think Orihime is a good match for Ichigo...but then I think that because no way would Renji allow Ichigo to get his woman! LoL! Nice fic! You'll have to let me know when you write that flashfic you owe me...I think I deleted flashfic from my LJ groups. |
| KittiKat626 2006-10-17 ch 1, | abuseThat was soo beautiful! Man, I love it, and I fear that I am close to tears. :D *Favs* ~KittiKat |
| violetctm 2006-03-29 ch 1, | abuseaw... i completely enjoyed it. wonderful job |
| jt 2005-09-09 ch 1, anon. | abusebeautiful |
| Gigai-Gurl 2005-08-15 ch 1, | abuseHmm...what's the word that best describes this fanfic? Ah, yes, poignant. You got the power of metaphors at your fingertips. When I grow up I want to write like you. =) Kudos! |
| Sailor Tiamat 2005-08-12 ch 1, | abuse*sniff* that was beautiful. ^__^ i never heard of stars being called wishing candles. very clever. |