nice

That was cute.

This was fatastic. Not only did you make it an A/T fic but so well-written. I thank you for this fic. It;s a great read.

ya know I usually dont read Ayame/Tohru but this was really good!

i LUV the story, its VERY good, but.. eh, i hafta know, its killing me.. whos the pairing?!?

:D

Brilliant! A lovely story with a cute pair! It had its sad moments but fills my heart to hear the promise and get a happy endings. Great job.

Woah...weird pairing...I thought it'd be Akito or Yuki...Ayame? O.O The story was excellent though. YAY!

The couple is Ayame and Tohru? Is it Tohru? Or who? Mine? WHO?! YOU DIDN'T SAY WHO! Or did you? Oh well. There has to be a way I can find out . . . MWUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

That is so good! I love it! I love all of your stories, they're all so touching.

This is a really great story. i'm not really an aya/tohru fan i decided to give it a try. I think you should write a sequel for this. and snape/hermione isn't really a weird pairing, it's more like a forbidden pairing. that's probably why there's 2300 stories of them. and that's only on anyway, keep up the awesome work.

Beautiful short story that, despite it's brevity, is packed with emotion. Nice work.

I admit it, I was lost. But I kept up because of the lovely writing. The pairing is complete and utter crack but I love how well it works. Neat little story and it is great to see you writing.

That was the WEIRDEST pairing I have ever read! (And just between me and you, I have read some weird pairings. Ever read Harry Potter? Yeah, some WEIRDO on another site put up a Hermione/Snape. ::shudders:: I was scarred for life.)

Anyway, despite the weirdness, it was a really good fic. I like Ayame. It's nice to see a serious side to him once in a while. Totally unexpected, though. I thought it was Kyo at first...or did I think it was Yuki? I thought it was unexpected. But hey, I'm really not all that bright to begin with, so it could just be me.

I wish I could give some constructive criticism instead of just telling you I like it, but...I can't think of any. Oh well!
You should write more Fruits Basket!

great! i luv how you write, making me think the story's going in one direction when you suddenly turn around and show it's really something else.

and i always luv your pairings! your obviously not afraid to diverge from the norm and yet you pull it off so successfully too. squee! luv, luv, luv! XD

Ah. That was sweet. Not many people write this pairing, but I've always liked it. =) Looking forward to whatever else you write, as usual!