Wow... I can't believe that you killed them both... *lol* But anyway... I really like that! It's a good story!
(Chrissy.W.x, member of the crazyDFFgang)

Sweet :D Incredible short story :D Love the fight scenes, and the Chris getting hurt (a) and can I say I like Wyness even if he is bad? :$ Nice little twist at the end too. I love how you write Chris all guilt ridden where he feels like he has to do his duty and protect everyone. Tis nice :D

:( Dude Wy's dead! *sobs quietly*

OKay so I'm finally responding because you-know-who finally has allowed me to log in =O and I remembered. :$ Awesome chapter apart from the dyng of the Halliwell's :( poor Wy and Chris *sniffles* you did well my dear.

ow *sniffles* poor Chris

awesome story Zana way to go *huggies*

Ok, can I be happy and sad at the same time? Wow, the ending was amazing! Poor Chris, he died trying to stop his brother and he kissed Ellen! I want to be in your next Chris story!;) Great way to end it, very suspensful! Great job!

Way to go dude :D and I kissed Chris *bounces* Like a dream come true *sighs deeply* So don't hesitate if you want to do an other short fic with me and Chris (A)

aw nice ending. It is really sweetly made (nods) and i liked wyatt and chris killig each other off, it was like they either both live or die... very nice :D

Me like this very much *huge grin* So what do you have planned for your next instalment (A) ?

I knew who the bad guy was!:) *jumps up and down clapping her hands* Great job, Turtle! Poor wounded Chris, aw! *hugs him* So Leo wants to come to the US, huh? Interesting! Fantastic job, I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Hmm, is all I'm going to say.

*ROFLMAO* Prince Charles' Study? DUDE! Too funny. :( I wanna go on Chris' adventure :( Sounds like fun. Leo's a little biatch though =P Too funny

OMG Wyatt! *hugs* hehe love it hun, carry on :D

Hehe, okay so I'm going to try and keep up. Because this is so adorably funny. *Wants to hug Leo - little cutie* :O Isn't Ellen a brave soul. :) *moves to next chapter*

oeh this is exitting lol love that you used Elen and Leo... this is really good :)

huggies and kissies

Oh queen of the myths and legends who saw fit to put me in my place all those months ago, I bow down to thee. :D Excellent little story you have going here. And *ahem* if we happen to elaborate a little more on the behind the scenes action (not that I'm asking you to, just saying) can one of those said Austaralian witches have a *cough* nice shiny athame to defend herself with *cough*?? (a)