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| dares to dream 2008-07-09 ch 18,  | abuseThird story in a day...i think I have too much time on my hands. haha. LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT! This one was amazing. Having the killer base his murders of a book that has the heroine like Nancy was so creative and very fun to read! Dom was a total phsyco, but giving his thoughts and everything really made the story even better! Now im off to read more of your wonderful works! +dares to dream+ |
| Alyson Drew 2008-05-17 ch 16, anon. | abuseWorked pretty good |
| Alyson Drew 2008-05-17 ch 12, anon. | abuseI hope I can join the club! I loved the fight between Ned and Frank! so romantic! |
| Alyson Drew 2008-05-17 ch 8, anon. | abuseGood Luck with your courier, but you would make a great detective! |
| Alyson Drew 2008-05-17 ch 7, anon. | abuseHey, I hate Brenda too. You know, the way you are writing this is great! You are a really good foreshadower. That means that you add really good clues before anything happens |
| Alyson Drew 2008-05-17 ch 3, anon. | abuseYou really made the characters in the origanal stories really sound like them. No really! |
| andi 2007-07-24 ch 6, anon. | abusethis is just plain creepy! I didn't like Brenda either - but I didn't wish her dead. Especially after she ended up actually helping Nan and the Hardys in Dead On Arrival. |
| DeanParker 2006-10-11 ch 18, | abuseLoved It! but no kiss, no kiss between Nancy and Frank, well i guess it would have been to soon. Very good story!! |
| angry penguin 2006-08-28 ch 18, | abuseAwesome story. |
| ndhbfan 2006-08-15 ch 18, | abuseGreat ending. I liked how Frank and Nancy could communicate when they were tied up across the room from each other. In the beginning I liked Ned and Nancy together, but as Frank came into the picture I started to wonder if Ned was the right one. At the end when Ned called Nancy shallow for liking that two guys were fighting over her, yes it does help a girl's ego when faced with that, but come on Ned is really diffucult some times. |
| ndhbfan 2006-08-15 ch 15, | abuseI like the title of this chapter its so true"This is not happening". First he takes Ned, Frank, Joe and then Nancy . B.D. is going to actually do work himself. |
| ndhbfan 2006-08-15 ch 13, | abuseI'm glad Nancy remembered the book store having security cameras watching everyone so they noticed Dom watching Nancy and Ann's conversation. Dom going to Ned's office was very brave. Even stupid. |
| ndhbfan 2006-08-15 ch 7, | abuseI was never a fan of Brenda Carlton, in the files series, but stranglation what a way to go. |
| ndhbfan 2006-08-15 ch 6, | abuseDom is so creepy. I like Nancy and B.D.'s relationship. Its great. I know getting Bess and George out of town is for their own good but they are such a great help when Nancy's working on a case. I, also, like Ned and Nancy together. Lately, I've been more of a Frank fan, but, this time I really like Ned. |
| ndhbfan 2006-08-14 ch 3, | abuseWhat start to this story. Dom is definately delusional. The fact that he is obessed with Nancy/Katie is very scary, but, it does happen unfortunately. Can't wait to read more. |