It was great LOL jessica being a weak pathetic wimp

I love love triangle! Kekeke...

Seeing that you haven't updated for years...I hope that you would update quite soon... '

Just don't make it too corny that I wouldn't be able to read it please :p

What a cute story. Remebering your loved one... aw... nice one!

I love Lise/Hawk.Moreover,I think that Jessica is more like Hawk's sister.anywayperfect story!

Ke!
So good!
Me like!
Do more!

yay, a hawk/lise fan too! _ Great story, you won't believe how long it took me to find a good fic starring those two!

This was very sweet and crisp...er, fresh? Haha, it was very straighr-forward and nice. I agree with you in your notes, about Jessica and Duran with Angela. I wish you will do a sequel on this story!

YEAH!MORE-MORE KID!

Wow. I absolutely love this fic. I think that Hawk and Lise just belong together like fleas on a dog. Okay, that's a bad analogy, but I can't think of anything else. Hawk and Lise just need to be together... sigh! Kodak moments! Thank you for your awesome, heartfelt fanfiction!

Real Cool is all I can say. Hawk is my altime favorite SD3 character. And Lise is my second. you really need to continue this or something. Most fanfics I think portray Hawk and the other characters completely out of character, but I think you this story is written very well. In some places there is a little unnecesary wordiness but that is just a reading ease problem. Great story.

PLEAAAASEEE make a sequel!

I'm begging you!

YEAHHH! I knew Lise and Hawk could make it! I KNEW it! Jessica's a b1t(h! She's just all WRONG for Hawk. I love your writing! Write more!

That was really good! Please make a sequel!

No sequel forthcoming at this point in time I would assume; nevertheless a pretty good fic as it is.

Very nice! Hawk and Lise make the absolute greatest SD3 couple. This story was well-written, too, with a nice, unique style.