Well, I’ve enjoyed your story tremendously and I will shamelessly ask that you do a sequel. I saw your note so PLEASE do one. I would love to read more about maybe the junior aurors’ next assignment because I love Druids Mantra and ancient rune mystery that you created and this Angelus. BRILLIANTLY DONE AND MOST CREATIVE. An expanded plot on something like it would be a worthwhile read. Possibly you could answer these questions in it or maybe answer my review.

1. Did Draco’s presence bring her out of her first sleep? OR Would she have bonded to just anyone standing at her bedside?
2. They said both show significant power level increases working together. Is there something special about him?
3. Since the nurse was burned by touching kitten and Draco wasn’t, would the power bomb have hurt him?

Highlights:
Plot believability – I enjoyed your expansion of the JKR world without disregarding it, keeping the pure bloods in character without having Draco and Ron driving cars and using cell phones.
Dialogue – Well blended dialog with action.
Characterization – Well done. Though published before the last of the JKR books, you do show that the characters are multi dimensional.
Description – Perfect character and scene descriptions.
Pacing – Excellent, everything flows nicely with good transitions, possibly you could add more description and action in Druids Mantra since its your baby
* On a formatting note, because of the way FF works you may want to do a line of x’s to denote a scene change since FF doesn’t seem to like extra spacing.
Romance – ADORABLE! Well paced progression from friends to lovers.

*You have contrasted them in a yin/yang way that I haven’t seen before and I love. For ease I’ll put her/him qualities that I noticed. The reason I’m putting this is that I never liked partnerships with a sidekick feel. Instead, I like where each other’s strengths cover the other’s weakness or simply not strong suit even though they’re not necessarily mutually exclusive. Anyways, here goes:

Emotional/Stoic, Inviting/Intimidating, Middle-class/High brow, Intelligent book learning/Intelligent world experience, Muggle knowledge/Old World Magic knowledge, Explosively powerful (angelus) but greatly weakened afterwards/Powerful stamina wise and can keep up the fight after she weakens, Innocent/Jaded, Feminine/Masculine (I hate it when a female is portrayed that the only way she can be strong is to act more masculine: a good cook can poison an army while sustaining no losses to her own side if you get my drift). Trusting/Paranoid, Timid/Outgoing, Careful/Risk taker, forthright/manipulative (Slytherin yeah!).

Overall terrific and very original. I look forward to the next one (HINT! HINT!). If this review inspires, just drop a line.

WOW! I absolutely loved this story! will there be a sequel?? u have an amazing tallent and i wish i could write as well as you do. keep up the good work

:)

yay!this was so awsome!:)

I like the ending to your story; it's not one of those stories, where everything ends up being perfect. Though, I'm a little confused about, whether Lestrange was killed off in the blast or not. I thought she was left binded in the cemetery, unless the cemetery was obliberated too. Great story. My favorite character would be Blain: and favorite scene that made me bust out laughing, was Snape wanting to have a removeable eye, so he wouldn't have to witness such a disgustingly sweet interaction between Hermione and Draco.

Wow! I loved your story - I could barely put my iPod down! I wasn't able to review for all the chapters, so I'll just have this one.
1. I ADORED Blain- he was an excellent addition to your story! The crazy ones- ya gotta luv em! He was insane, funny, completely original and an all around excellent character that you came up with- be proud of him!
2. The relationship between Draco and Moody was another thing I've never seen and thought was great- the way he called him old man was cool too!
3. Another original and excellent idea was the 'Kitten' and Angelus. I liked how in the beginning, she clung to Draco- that was funny. Thier entire relationship was well done- not cliché which is good, and I have to admit, Moody barging in on them was wonderful! Also, the idea of the Kitten and sort if alter ego was good, and the little details you added were perfect- piggyback rides, that sort of thing!
4. It was well closed. I've come across many a story that ends with everything perfect -Yay! Voldy's gone! Party!- I liked how you showed that after killing, nobody is really going to want that.
Alright! It's time I wrapped this up- All around, excellent job! A+ and a :D!

great fic :)

Hey there!

Although it didn't feel like HP, your fanfic was amazing.. Your characters were known, but you have created a whole different plot. I am sure you would be as good by writing your own stories.

It was a pleasure to read it, thank you :)

Thank you so much for writing an absolutely amazing story! You write incredibly eloquently and I eagerly await a sequel..please!

I think the best part was when Severus expressed his envy of Moody's removable eye. =) This was excellent. You had an excellent plot going. Thank you for sharing.

I absolutely love this story. Keep up the good work.

Oh wow! I read this story before makng my account and im glad i found it so i could add it to my favorite list. This is the story that made me become addicted to fanfiction, i liked it that much. You write dramione better than anyone i have ever read!

This is really good!
Aren't you so proud? I found this story because it was on the Draco/Hermione wiki page. So good job! Yay you.
Hermione is slightly OC, though. That's okay- creative license and all that.
I like your writing.

Oh my god! I LOVED ths story! It was simply amazing and I loved the split-personality Hermione and the Angelus thing and everything. But I think my favourite part of ths story was Blain and his band of psycho vampires. Haha! He reminded me of the Mad Hatter n Alice in Wonderland. And I liked how Draco was affectionate and everything, but not a blubbering wimp like some other authors make him out to be. I hate it when they make Draco cry at the drop of a hat.
Good job, though! Definitely going on my favourites!

WOW! I had to add this to my favourites yesterday so that I could be sure I could finish reading it (I had to quit when it reached 2am this morning lol) So I read this whole fic in two (very long but enjoyable) sittings.

This was a fantastic piece of work, very original and well written - I'm sure I will read it all again in the future!

A sequel would be good, but if not then please at least an epilogue just so we can experience happy-Hermione again at the very end of this tale.

Also there were a few spelling and grammar mistakes, which if you decide to rectify in the future I would be more than happy to beta.

Well done on a fabulous fic x

this is possibly the best d/h fanfic i have ever read. witch is saying alot as i read them in 2 speches. i love Blain. he is amazing and i was sad to see him go. but then you brought him back and the end and i was thrilled! i love him! i realy realy would like a sequel. however i realize that you cant force writing . but if you got it in you please give me more! you are an amzing writer your descriptions were detailed and your story intreaging and amusing. please keep writing.