Wow! That was a really good story! Nice twist at the end too!

who's the woman with henry?just wandering.

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Wow...this was really good. XD Awesome!! XD

That was great, and in a way I think Walter was more like someone who had spent their life collecting things and when he couldn't find Henry to add to his "collection" he became upset due to the simple fact that he went through all this trouble and pain and sacrifice to complete his work.

And great character developement with Walter! I loved this story!

*picks it up and puts it in her pocket of favorites*

There you go!

That was hauntingly beautiful...and very original. The torture scenes with Henry made me cringe...and I truly felt his pain...(not literally, but the way you wrote it was well done.)

*sigh* poor Walter...poor Henry...no one fares well in SH do they?


Will look for more stories by you...you're talented.

Take care...

I loved it...Amazing work, the descriptions, etc. ^^ Keep on writing.

wow... you are very talented. That is one of the best fanfiction stories I have ever read, and I am being truthfull. I love how you incorperated "Room of Angel" into the story. And it was a very intersting view on Walters side. I am crazy about Henry and Walter... thats the reason why I was so keen to read this. Also the fact that my nickname is "angel" and I loved the song "Room of angel". At the time I was playing the game, I didn't know it was called that. So when I found it on the WEB... it made the song all the more special... and you just made it even more so with that beautiflly written story. Thanks.

Very nice. Very nice indeed.

It was awesome and your style of writing was great.

That was a sad and in a twisted and disturbed way a beautiful story. I feel sory for Walter being killed by his mother. Oh and poor Henry! Well, I hope you write a new story, mabey one that isnt SO sad. But this one was really good and thoughtful. Okay thank you bye-bye.

I actually couldn't see a bit of slash in this.

Your version of the Holy Mother... creeped me out. As did the children under the water wheel. Heebie jeebies, man.

When you talk about what made Walter choose each Sacrament, you forget to mention Jasper. But you also don't always pick a trait that associates them with their respective themes.

Though Walter torturing Henry explains why Henry's body was so disfigured when it was found, I don't understand why Walter prolonged Henry's death. Was it necessary for Henry's will to be broken? And if Walter does revere him, would he really take such pleasure in it instead of just solemnly doing a duty?

I don't think the Order meant to kill the children in the tower. I think there's a memo in the game that says that the moisture in the air or something actually warped the doors so that they couldn't get some of the cells open anymore. So I don't think it has anything to do with the children being corrupt. If you'd like to say differently in your story, make it clear whether Walter just doesn't care about them or thinks they deserve it because they wouldn't accept the cult's teachings.

I'm also not sure why Walter would leave the apartment (his mother's side) so quickly just to make sure that Henry's ghost was around. Or why the Holy Mother decided to adopt a new son and kill her old one.

This is fairly well written, with just some spelling errors here and there. I would also tell you to be more careful with your word choices, but I suppose that's really more about personal preference than anything else.

I feel like I'm saying a lot of negative things, but I assure you that I did like this.

(As for Impaired, I'm glad you like it so much. I'm working on the next chapter, but it's rather... extensive. I keep thinking I'll finish it any day now, but... Stay patient. ^_^;)

Hey... Okay... This was interesting... Actually, it was really good...

Heh, maybe I'll write something like this... Nicely done... though it's 'Blonde', and 'Brunette'.

Yep...

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