|Reviews for Too Far Inside|
| sam 3/5/06 . chapter 1
"a color that would be called pink if it wasn’t so obviously red"
truly inspired line.
I love that line.
| Celadrian 11/8/05 . chapter 1
Poor poor Obi! I want to go grab Qui-Gon and bring him back to tell Obi that everything will be alright...
Argh. I will now, through an amazing feat of willpower, tear myself away from your stories and go write my paper. (Translation: I won't read anything else for an entire half-hour. If I'm *extraordinarily* dedicated to completing my stupid assignment.)
| SilentLaurel 10/1/05 . chapter 1
This is awesome. It gives me an eery shivery feeling. The powerfully written peice you have. The imagery of red is stark and overwhelming. The dream was tangled and unclear-like dreams are-yet there is forboding in it. Shrouded glimpses of the past and of the future.
And yet... the most moving part is the second half. Because it gives a new perspective to Obi-Wan's repeated statements in Attack of the Clones. No longer does the line seem cold and unfeeling. Instead it says, "I know, Anakin. I understand. Dreams *must* pass. They must. They must. Because if we do not believe that then we are both undone."
Sweetness factor is won by this line: "But the boy suddenly leaned forward and threw his arms around his master’s neck in a tight hug. “I’ll go,” he murmured, his mouth close to Obi-Wan’s ear. “But I don’t care if you wake me up again. I really don’t.” "
This story is powerfully understated. A masterpiece.
| alchemy dream 8/25/05 . chapter 1
After reading your other story, I decided to check this out. It's very...tender. Very tender. I love it. Though he offers many trials and tribulations, because of age and personality, Anakin also offers peace and salvation to Obi-wan. Beautifully rendered.
| azizah 8/18/05 . chapter 1
Dear co-staffer (BPFF),
Once again you have me reading an Anakin fic and I really don't like them, but you do such a good job on Obi-Wan as a master that I can't stay away. Loved Rushing Wind too.
| crazyAZN kid 8/7/05 . chapter 1
Ah, very cute.
| arliddian 8/7/05 . chapter 1
Wow. That was just beautiful. You captured Obi-Wan brilliantly, and your description of the dream was simply amazing. I'm in awe.
| Swank too lazy to log in 8/7/05 . chapter 1
Aw. Anakin's concern for his master was so adorable. I applaud you. *applauds*
| i luv ewansmile 8/7/05 . chapter 1
That was awesome! (lol) I'm speechless, you did a really good job with this story. Keep 'em comin' I enjoy reading them! :)
| Princess Electra 8/7/05 . chapter 1
Nice, I like that!
That last line... Obi-Wan was trying to convince himself, more than anyone else, methinks.
And Anakin *is* like Qui-Gon. Unfortunately, that's a depressing thought for me. *sniffie*
| Kekelina 8/7/05 . chapter 1
A very well written piece. You characterized Obi-Wan's thought processes nicely and completely in character. No doubt he would be more than shaken after Qui-Gon's death.
Also, I found it extremely clever to have Anakin be able to sense Obi-Wan's feelings. It was cute and sweet and I adored it.
| Katieelessar 8/7/05 . chapter 1
Wow that was great! I was sad that it was only a one-shot but it was amazing anyways. The dream was very very spooky I was almost getting scared myself. Hee hee. And Anakin's and Obi-Wan's reactions are how I would imagine them if it ever happened. Very wonderful. Keep at it!