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| Dybdahl 2006-04-22 ch 1,  | abusePlease do a second, that was just brilliant. |
| SiniseLuvr 2006-03-06 ch 1, | abuseYES DO A SECOND STORY! Gah! Omgomgomgomg I think I just had a heart attack from that mental image! MacDanny is so gorgeous!! Thank you for this! |
| Kotay 2005-09-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseLovely cute, ya've so gotta continue! |
| Tina-NSfan 2005-08-09 ch 1, | abuseYa entendí porque me repetias tanto que me querías... No sé quien estará más loca, si Paly o tu. Y PORSUPUESTO QUE ME ACORDE DE ELLA. No te puedes imaginar la cara que tengo ahora. Desde el primer párrafo me llegó esa idea pero quise seguir leyendo para ver si era lo que me estába temiendo, o alguna luz al final del tunel, podría salvarme la vida... Em... Ya estoy escuchando: "Hey Doc, cause of death?" ... Espero que me vengas con algo mejor porque a estas alturas, no sé si reir o llorar... Te lo juro. AUNQUE Siempre te sales con las tuyas. No me agradas. ¬¬ La verdad es que estuvo bueno. No lo puedo negar. Pero es que tu sabes muy bien que yo leo y veo las escenas en mi mente ¿COMO ME HACES ESO? De cualquier forma, sabes que no puedes hacer que te odie. Sería imposible. Tina! |
| AndryfromtheDark 2005-08-08 ch 1, | abuseYou, little **, just did this to shut me up, didn't you? Sure you did!. But still I like it, and I sent you a nice long review with the longest mail ever (answer to the longest mail that I ever get, and it took me more than 10' to read!) Well, you know I love you, so. |
| Kharma 2005-08-08 ch 1, | abuseGood beginning but I would just like to suggest something (and please don't think this is a criticism, because it isn't). You might like to get a beta that speaks English as a first language because there were quite a few mistakes in there (although I have seen worse in people that supposedly speak English as a first language). That said, I did enjoy it and I look forward to seeing where you take it and I have added it to my story alert list. |
| just a reader 2005-08-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice story! The fact that english is not your first language is not apparent. There are a few mistakes, but native speakers have made more egregious mistakes in stories less well-written. I hope you choose to do a follow-up story! |
| Sara Sidle 2005-08-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseCase Number: 01 Crime scene: Paly's Messer Bedroom Cause of Death: Suicide? Murder?? _ Que quieres que te diga amigaza... el suelo del primer piso de mi casa te dice hello!!, ya que el impacto qeu tuve a l leer esto fue tremendo. La calidad literaria, excelente como siempre... pero el tema... YUK! no quiero ni pernsar en un capi dos, no no no Besos y te re quiero Pals |
| jewelbaby 2005-08-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseMust do a second? Of course. better cause this was good. |
| fruitbat00 2005-08-07 ch 1, | abuseNice...so are you going to continue this is Danny Going continue this? |