nice.

I think it's quite good, though my favourite is still the 'Nine Circles of Hell'. ;)

I love the story great details of the surrounding.

the people on the other was not so great so you might want to change that.

Wow, I didn't expect the knife to be made of glass and hidden in a pitcher of water...

Good thinking!

Ahh...this one was pretty easy. I figured it out, and usually I'm slow with these kinds of things...But, nevertheless I loved it!It's okay...Nice job! I'll look forward to your other fics!

Oh...Nice editing...O_o Even though I think this is kind of late...The editing is really nice. D It explains more about the criminal. D Good job!

see you space cowboy...

I didn't figure that one out! *i'm slow* XD

I like the way you described it! Slow description, so that we would be able to read everything.

Tip: Don't cut off everything too short...Make some at least a 3 liner... _

thanks for submitting a review to me! And btw,

*i can see plates in water!*

Great mystery! _

Very nice! _ I was a bit dissapointed for they already knew the killer. but i loved how they found the knife. it was wonderful. i got some inspiration. i needed some. thanks for the inspiration. _

'You have incredible talent, Mr. Kobayashi. It’s just too bad that you used it for crime and for the pursuit of your own twisted amusement'

Wonderful! I was thinking the exact same thing.

Miki

I've never written a crime story, nor read one aside from your fanfics, so I can't judge. I was just kinda skeptical about the knife being cleaned so easily in the jacket. There would've have been some blood left, therefore contaminating the pitcher, am I right? Oh, well. This is okay, but I like Kokoryu High Murders and The Nine Circles of Hell better. Oh, please do more!

Oh, and, I was kinda disappointed that they knew the killer immediately and just had to find the knife :(.

I'm glad Shizuko is still in your stories, she is a really great extra character and I'm glad that you can protray her so well. Hehe, this time it was all Kyu that did the solving and its always him that will reveal the opposing side to what the culprit is thinking. I didn't read the story before so I can't say but this current one is great, I'm not the best in English so I can't say english wise how it was though I thought it ran smoothly, but I enjoyed the plot, it was so cool! Glass, never would have thought that was possible, you really are talented and its so cool how you think of such great story lines. I reviewed for your first story and I'm not sure if I mentioned it but I want to congratulate you on a job well done, all your mysteries are intriging, they are suspenseful but they have humour in it as well. Well, I definitely hope you keep this up!

The story was ok, but I'm a bit disappointed. One, you didn't explain the murderer's motive. Two, I don't think a glass knife could be wiped clean in a second, especially with sumthing dry, but since this is fiction I'll let this get through. Three, it wasn't as detailed as it should be, everything seems so broad in my view. I have to say thou that the Nine Circles of Hell that you wrote overpowers this story by a lot.

yeah... i read this ages ago but was too busy to review...sorry...okay the mystery was great but what's the motive, is he deranged like that.? or did you miss?

Nice story, nice plot. everything is great. keep on writing.

Exellent, as always!

hey wazup friend! just like to point out this part:

Their /susoect/ quickly made for the back of the club

wrong spelling... :b but anyway i liked the story and oh by the way this is yours truly "escape"