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| JUST LOVE IT 2008-06-29 ch 1,  | abusei heart it. it = story. |
| Tania-R 2006-04-22 ch 1, | abuseThat was very sweet. Sad and very sweet |
| erica2004 2006-01-17 ch 1, | abuseThis story is so beautiful. Heart-wrenching and uplifting at the same time. |
| Alyssa-Naberrie 2005-12-02 ch 1, | abuseoh my! i really wish you would continue this! beautiful! |
| Skye0906 2005-10-16 ch 1, | abuseAboslutely lovely. Melancholy and sweet and calm. Excellent touch with the repeat at the end, it made me smile how you incorporated Teyla's singing-style into the format of your story. A most wonderful way to distract me from school readings, thank you for sharing ^_^. |
| Cpt. Ritter 2005-08-26 ch 1, | abuseOh, really really sweet. Well written, and obviously Sheyla, but hey, I like it. Great job. |
| cherryblossomjen 2005-08-14 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was excellent. The best Teyla story I've read yet. |
| saturn17x 2005-08-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow I really enjoyed it. I loved the way you repeated the first paragraph at the end. It brought everything to beautiful closing. Very moving. |
| CharmedAli 2005-08-09 ch 1, | abusethat's really good, i thouroughly enjoyed it |
| drufan 2005-08-08 ch 1, | abuseThat was great. Teyla does not get her fair share of introspections. Really liked it. Well done. |
| potterfan2006 2005-08-08 ch 1, | abuseSad but cool had some deep meaning to it and i was cool i love it potterfan2006 |
| Donna Lynn 2005-08-07 ch 1, | abuseInteresting story. I'm gonna take a guess that she once had a miscarriage. I liked it. |
| Cata 2005-08-07 ch 1, anon. | abuselovely, sad and very very setling. thanks for writing. |
| Madj 2005-08-07 ch 1, | abuseWhat a lovely story! I like these little moments that could very well take place anywhere in the season. Well, OK, last season (because of Ford). I feel sad for Teyla to have even more pain in her past. Poor thing certainly has been through hell. Don't blame her at all for wanting John. He'd be a perfect match for her. Thanks so much for writing. I hope we'll see more from you! |
| Beth Elia 2005-08-07 ch 1, | abuseThis story is like the song within it -sad, but full of hope. I'm not ashamed to say I shed a tear or two while reading it. You're a gifted author. I hope you continue to write more. |