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| valenciadarkness 2007-09-08 ch 12, | abuseWow...awesome story! You're such a good writer! |
| every you 2007-01-24 ch 12, | abuseLoved it so much I'm printing it to hide unde rmy mattress and read it any time I feel like reading it. |
| SpiritualEnergy 2006-07-23 ch 1, | abuseThis was a great story - the emotion you displayed was wonderfully brought out, and the characterization of everyone was great. Your detail is written nicely, of both thoughts and setting. I also loved the ending. Excellent story. It was beautiful. |
| PowermadMistress 2006-06-30 ch 4, anon. | abusethat was so sweet and romantic! I loved it ther isnt much more to say ^^ |
| PowermadMistress 2006-06-30 ch 3, anon. | abuseOMG! that was the sweatest most romantic moment, interuted but still so cute I could just imagine it, you've written this soo well the charecters are very well written ^^ |
| PowermadMistress 2006-06-30 ch 2, anon. | abusethis is the first fan fic I've read in ages, and the first kaixtyson fic I've read...EVER! And its great! I thought everything in the story was really terrific and just how I imagine they would act ^^ and I didnt think kai was out of charecter ^^ |
| Wolf-Snow-Blossom 2006-06-05 ch 12, | abuseOh god,that was,BEAUTIFULL,really beautifull, It almost made me cry, not that it's sad or anything, I Just loved how the chapters were written, You really are a good author, I'd say your the best simply the best, well that's it buh-bye mieY lOveS yOu |
| shadowwolf0379 2006-04-03 ch 3, | abuseim lovin dis story so far but i gotta go do summat just now but don't worry ill read the rest once im fished coz dis fic rocks! X Shadow x |
| rachi 2006-03-04 ch 9, anon. | abuse*drools* I - that - you - they - that was - TOTALLY INCREDABLY AMAZINGLY ONE OF THE BEST FICS I'VE EVER READ! I LUFFED this fic. I cried(more than once), I laughed, I sighed(happily), I nearly fainted, I smiled, and most importantly, I was captivated. You made everything so real, and making things loving but keeping them the same! I think Kai and Tyson are one of the most kawaii couples out there(besides Sasuke and Naruto, of course.)!! So, besides going on about how totally flipping amazing your fic was, I'm going to say something else. I totally love your ramblings. ^-^ Totally and completely, one of the best fics ever, and I salute you! *tries to salute but forgets how* Oh, screw it. Anyways, I'll be looking around your profile to find anymore awesome fics you have stored around. *cheers* Yay! Love you much and wish you well, ~+rachi+~ |
| hyourin.tenshi 2006-02-13 ch 12, | abuseKai x Takao forever HELL YEAH! |
| hyourin.tenshi 2006-02-13 ch 10, | abuseI LOVE YOUR STORIES! |
| Bob the Almighty 2006-02-01 ch 12, | abuseI really like this fic. It's very sappy, and has some major cliches, but it flows very nicely and has some genuinely *beautiful* imagery. |
| K-S-A Eris 2006-01-12 ch 12, | abuseAw (face scrunches up with happy tears), that is the greatest ending ever... |
| lilgirl14 2005-11-11 ch 12, anon. | abusei really liked your story! |
| TechnoRanma 2005-11-10 ch 12, | abuseYknow it took me ages to actually review since I read that you weren't gonna write anymore... I nearly fainted when I found that out, I got all upset and teary and stuff... I KNOW that sounds crazy cuz I never really talked to ya or anythin and I didn't review every single chapter of your fics I dun think... but this fic. This story and YOU. Never have I read a beyblade story that took it to the level of me being able to see it concluding the Tyson/Kai relationship in sucha real way that now any other fic seems like it aint the truth. I took to callin' you my angel, this author who came outta nowhere and presented this heaven after Beyblade has ended... You gave me afterlife in this fandom!! And I aint religious, but I sure do feel that way. I dunno how much I wanna say about this story, I think it's perfect. I think it couldn't have been told better, and the emotions... how'd you manage to make it so completely in character that I can't imagine it any other way?! It seems kinda unfair that you make Tyson and Kai's love so complete and then just leave... but I guess I can understand. Perfection shouldn't be messed with. ...After a long long time supporting this couple... my first boy/boy OTP... I forgot the tingly feeling that came with it. This gave me that back with 10 times the power! I won't forget this story, or you. I'll remember it... heh... Forever. |