This is really good. Very emotional, angsty. It reflects Tsuzuki's sadness and inner turmoil quite nicely. I'd also like to tell you my thoughts on 'Crudus'. Yes, it was confusing, but very well written. Thank you for clarifying that it was an imaginary friend, because i had no idea who his 'friend' was. You've captured the emotions of the characters wonderfully. - Sincerely, Purity a.k.a. Adrianne

Nice

Wow... Very poignant... Short, but it's so emotionally charged that it seems long enough anyway.

I love it... Going on my favorite stories list.

Oh...Me like. Good job.

oh, and i can just see tsuzuki doing this too, so sad and angsty!

Ooooh! I really liked this! I think you did a wonderful job and I do love angst. I really like this idea for Tsuzuki's character. It was very sad, but also very powerful. I think you are right about third person - it worked very well. Great job!

i think this story is really well writen even if it was very short. this is what tsuzuki would think of himself, his depression, and his need for people to like him. this could be seen as also a carry over from his childhood (when he was alive) when almost no one liked him. i would like to see more of the work written by this person.

I'm reviewing for all of your stories at once because I'm lazy. I'm trying to get into the habit of reviewing more often, so here goes. I think The Things They Carried is a wonderful book, excellent writing about war, it makes me think of anime stories a lot so its great that someone else does to. I think that you should definitely continue Crash and Burn. It's so interesting and angsty! Van and Hitomi are acting so differently, but it's not quite OOC because its plausible that they might change given the circumstances. What's Folken planning? Is Dilandau going to change back to Celena? I also appreciate all the Folken stories. He's my favorite character and I love seeing the different levels of characterization that people develop for him. Thank you for the Chid fic, he's so cute! Paintballing is hilarious. And please write more Yami no Matsui stories! I've only recently gotten into the manga but everything that I've seen I like. Thank you and keep writing!

I *like* the use of third person for this character study... It works very well. It's a good analysis of the darker, sadder side of Tsuzuki's character... very evocative too, almost like a little prose poem. And heartbreakingly sad... poor guy...

ack...i coulda sworn i already reviewed this...::grumbles while shaking her chinese herbal medicine and swings awkwardly from side to side:: O_O ehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...you're...disturbed, ne? the idea's rather interesting...and tsuzuki's got rather serious problems. funny how he says sorry and then turns so...egocentric and denial-proned...muahah. hmm...i think i already reviewed this in class, but i suppose i'll comment again. the parody of the things they carried is rather clever, although i'd rather not stick to english-related junk [which worries me cuz i have no idea why i'm writing "the art of conformity: for the urban idiot"...craziness] once again...the mood's and details are nicely tied together...don't see how you manage it...maybe you're not sick like me _ love the fic...by the way...if you couldn't tell XD