That was lovely. And as a cat owner, or should I say the property of said two cats, you've hit then nail on the head.

The mental image of Grissom teaching Dinah how to use her toy made me laugh.

This was really cute.

The funny thing about that was that the only animals grissom ever looks at are bugs or some dead thing in a jar.

Aw! 'Dust' typical of sarah! lol. I normally dont read S/G but this one caught my attention

Hope this isn't the end of it.

Nice to read a fic that captures my attention from the first sentence.

Cute fic. I liked it a lot.

Jackie

Grissom is so busted and Dinah challenged. :-) Giving instructions to the cat like she was a member of his team was priceless and such a Grissom thing to do.

OMG, the way Grissom was explaining the cat how to play with the toy was hilarious ! I can just see him doing that LOL. Funny story, really enjoyed reading it.

Lin

Great sequel. Love that last line. :)

um we need more a like NOW! we need a chapter 2 we need to know what happens next we know he did nothing the first time she wiped chalk from his face (i am still convinced there was no chalk...she just wanted to touch him) so you have to give us more!

sassy

Oh man, that was funny stuff. I love that he knows her so well that he's got the staff on the lookout for her. I had to laugh out loud when he was using all these big words to simply teach Dinah how to use the toy dove. I bet that if Sara laid her head down on his lap, and he started stroking *her* hair, he'd get a pretty good response as well.