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crossmyheartforever
2009-10-18 . chapter 12
Incredible plot. Exceptional writing. Please tell me you'll come back to this story eventually. Your loyal fans miss you! XD
Shinjiteru
2009-04-07 . chapter 12
I adore this story- it's perfect :) keep on writing b/c your style is amazing, you don't know how many times I laughed myself to tears because of your fic. I love your Naruto and I love your Sasuke, and I wish Yohko was a real character.

If you'd let me, I'd like to make you a fanart. Any wishes?
le-plume-beni
2009-02-08 . chapter 12
I love this fic! It kind of reminds me of Gokusen.
Rikado
2009-02-02 . chapter 12
I love this story! I have noticed that you haven't updated in a while. I'm not purposely trying to sound disrespectful, rude, or anything but you haven't died right?! In any case your writing style is amazing! I love the character depth and how you portray all the characters. I'm surprised this doesn't have more reviews. Please don't give up on this story and update as soon as you can okay?
AluminumMuse
2008-10-05 . chapter 5
Ooh, I really like it. Double thumbs up. I would only point out that the standards seem lacking for an international private school. Three paragraphs for an essay is awfully lax. Usually essays are assigned by word count, for instance, a three paragraph essay would come out at about 500 words if it was done well. Also, plagiarism, or anything coming close to plagiarism, is illegal and often times a particularly prickly issue in history classes- far pricklier than bullying and cheating on tests (the latter of which is, at least for high school students, not actually punishable by law)- where it's pretty common.

Other than that, though, very good! I like that you haven't made Naruto a total idiot, and that in many ways, Sasuke still has to learn how far her can push. He wants to show off how little he cares about his history class, but he doesn't have the maturity to put the possible repercussions into perspective.
creepy crab
2008-07-03 . chapter 11
so... are you going to update this or are you going to just let it rot here?
its been more than a year already.
DemonEclipse
2008-06-29 . chapter 12
moar
ArgyBargy
2008-02-11 . chapter 12
Loved this chapter, seriously. Best so far. :D

I'm so glad the relationship with Sasuke and Naruto seems to be evening out, and that Naruto is being capable and kicking ** as he should be. You can't /just/ have weepy angst you know. There has to be **-kicking as well. xD

this won't turn into one of those fics where a blushing and stuttering helpless/incompetent!Naruto gets constantly RAPED by Sasuke and starts liking it so much (despite initial token protests) that they end up sharing an apartment and giving each other FLUFFY MANHUGS. So creepy. Many a good fic had been spoiled by that mindbendingly unrealistic course of action. D:

Onto praises: Everyone's so IC. You describe things amazingly, especially feelings. The action seems snappy and makes you feel like you're there with the character. The dialogue is sharp and witty, as is the rest of this fic. This is what I have been searching for. *cries tears of unfettered joy*
Ragnilde
2008-02-10 . chapter 12
I really love your works. I think you're really talented!
Keep up the good work!

ps: I'm not going to bother you with impulsive questions about the next chapters because I added the story to favorites and Story alerts!
AMI-CHAN
2007-12-26 . chapter 12
Not much of a fluff aren't you?... loves it...

UPDATE!
VictimOfCircumstance
2007-11-26 . chapter 12
HOLY **. i am officially in love with your Sasuke. before, i was kind of annoyed with him for being so unemotional, but i dealt with it. but when he pulls the gun and beats up gozu and meizu and calls Naruto a scaredy-cat (CANON) he was MARVELOUS. (like some kind of samurai) (irony is glorious).

and, no offense, Naruto is really starting to ** me off. He's so whiny and emo and "no one knows my pain! ANGST ANGST!" and closed-minded to other people's pain. tell me sasuke has an angsty back-story to rival his, please. because Naruto's self-pity kink is getting tiring.

anyway. continue. please.
creepy crab
2007-11-26 . chapter 12
when are u going to update? its been 8 months already... r u discontinuing it or sumthin? hope not. its hard to find good stories nowadays. come on, update already.
keikeiaznqueen
2007-11-09 . chapter 12
You are a brilliant writer! Naruto is a really complex character in this fic, I think-- he's so conflicted. XD I also love your Sasuke, so mysterious and all. He does seem more raw than Naruto though, experience-wise, since he's younger and all, but being Sasuke, I guess he's still very sophisticated-- enough to fight Haku, hehe~

I'm waiting for your next chapter! Please update soon!
tenshi ai123
2007-08-11 . chapter 12
Oh. My. God.
That is all I have to say.
Naruto kicks some major **! And Sasuke. Oh...little secrets!
Please continue, and complete this story in the near future and to the best of your abilities. -little bow-
TA
(SASUKE RULES!! GO HORNY TEENS!! WHOO!!)
Zephyras
2007-07-17 . chapter 12
You have got to update soon or I'm going to go INSANE! You wouldn't want that on your conscience, right?
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