This is a really good story so far. The plot is carefully thought-out and detailed, and I do like Ama (I'm generally not keen on OCs as they tend to be rubbish, but Ama is a really good character!)

However, there are a few minor spelling/grammar/punctuation issues, so you might want to get someone to have a look at it before you post again (which I hope you will do!)

Lily Potter? Well, that's interesting. Lovely Lily has already married James Potter at school and is now going out with Severus Snape. No surprise, James goes berserk.
Legimency - should be legilimency, occulmency -> occlumency I know I'm a bit nit-picky...
Apart from that nice story so far. I like Ama, though I think it is actually a good decision for Snape not to fancy her.

Good story so far.
*Poison*, however, was released in the early 90's.

AWESOME!
UPDATE SOON!

okay...Some people have NO life what so ever *coughs "Sanapey my name Sanapey" coughs*. Bet you this person Is like 12 looking up words in a dictionary lol. Anyway GREAT story I would tell you in hundred different forms how great it was but you know... I HAVE a life.
keep up the good work!11

I liked this chapter. It was a long time between updates though *pouts*

NOO!! IT CAN'T BE OVER! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT! -sobs-
MY LIFE IS WORHTLESS NOW!

Why? Oh, why?

='(

ANYWAY, I LOVE THIS FANFIC!

Spooky...red.red.red.red.red.red.red.red...

But Great!

"There’s an important man coming: did you ever hear of Lord Voldemort?”

...

You can't imagine how much I laughed!

All fanfics with Severus I've read, Tobias is a EVIL! And in the beginning of this chapter, I was so sure he was good.. but... -shakes head and sighs-

People have to write later the reason why Severus's acting like he does in school, and the reason is often, if not always, his father..

I LOVE THE CHAPTER!

BAD RUDOLPHUS!

Can't wait to read the next chapter, though.. -grins-

I'M IN LOVE!

With Severus Snape!
I love reading fanfics with Severus. In there, he's made to be so misunderstood...

aww... he just needs a hug!
-hugs Sev-

Rather short, but good!

He loves her like a sister.. aww...
-cough-

great chapter =D

Were you in a Shakespeare mood when you wrote this? 'Macbeth' and 'Romeo'..
not that it's a bad thing.. xD
anyway, this is great!