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| XxMemories4everxX 2008-07-14 ch 2, | abuseGreat drabbel/story! |
| Toastuh 2006-06-14 ch 2, | abuseThis is lovely, just three errors I could catch. The word 'loosing' instead of 'losing' in the first chapter, the lack of space between the words 'the good doctor' and 'first' in the second chapter, and one of Munch's quotes is missing a punctuation mark at the end in the first chapter. Aside from that, it's really good. I like how you tell the story in all quotes. It's pretty darned spiffy, and the caliber of writing's awesome. Stars given (out of ten): 9 |
| SamuraiCat1019 2006-04-12 ch 2, | abuseAw. These drabbles are sweet. I just love Munch/Fin. Hoping to see some great work frome you! |
| BrOkEn2NiTe 2005-12-18 ch 2, | abusetho I'm not a Fin/Munch fan, I did think this was cute lol |
| Scrawler 2005-08-19 ch 2, anon. | abuseAww, cuteness! More? |
| xKokurox 2005-08-17 ch 2, | abuseUpdate! Your story is good, the pairing is awesome, and the cliffhanger is EVIL!! UPDATE! Good story, of course, now update! |
| garretelliot 2005-08-11 ch 2, | abuseI love this, even though this is situation we won't see on screen you've caught the way these two speak to each other so well. The characterizations are wonderful. I hope you intend to continue this collection, it's very intriguing. Great job, what's next? |
| softnsensual457 2005-08-08 ch 1, | abuseAw! Cute! With the way he was talking, I thought something was wrong! |