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| AnyaChristina 2006-08-21 ch 1,  | abuseYou wrote a cute little oneshot, but there wasn't a lead-up. When things just happen like that, with no reason, it's pretty anti-climactic. |
| michellealx8 2005-08-09 ch 1, | abuseThis was cute..I kinda wish there was a little more to it |