loved this soooo much 3

hijikata was ooc but it was hilarious!

Shourin, you made me really love HijikataxOkita!

Poor Hijikata, even it's OOC, it's still so funny and amusing.

I really wonder how Hijikata maintain his sanity being so long with Okita?

Make more of them, please?

gotta love the OOCness XD!

KYAHAHAHAHA! XD XD

That wuz outta funny! XD XD

Loved it! Awesome work.

Hehehe! Wonderful writing!

Hahaha! Souji got away with punishment! This is so funny!

very lovely! can't imagine Hijikata-san would weaken like that! XD XD XD... i wish they had this episode but damn they dont! ARRGGHH! Keep it up! lovely story! made my day great!

ahihihi... its so funny... and sweet. hihih i couldn't stop laughing on this part: “Honey, baby, my sweet sugar plum, don’t cry now, sweetheart, my love, I’m here okay… I’m here… see… see… don’t cry now… sweetie pie, pumpkin… chu…chu…chu…”

nyahahahah! *clears throat* hihi its very god! nice_

OMG, it was one of the best fanfics I have ever read! *.* Everything was perfect! Omedetou gozaimasu!

*doesn't feel like logging in*

ROFLMAO. XD Oh my jesus, I loved that to bits! XD Aww, Souji is so adorable, and Hijikata is so Smexxy. O.o Mm mm. Anywho, this was just hilarious, I loved it so much. x]Yay!

xD Hahaha! This story was so uberly fantastic, it made me giggle so much! Poor little Souji *hugs* though he was happy at the end, ne? XD

I loved it was so cute aww poor souji wow hijikata is like really dense anyways great job.

nice.

I really like this story. It's one of my favorite PMK fics. I like the interaction between Okita and Hijikata.

The only thing I didn't like about this story was the race car comment Hijikata made. It just doesn't fit in with PMK and seems awkward.

Once again, this is a really good story.