He spends his day being sick from the horrible cooking. Even Vampires can catch food poisoning, you know!

I love it, to a point whenever I'm in the lunchline I recite a few lines in my head. Like a song. You're a very talented writer.

That was fabulous. I love your poems. Most people have one or the other, poems or prose, but you can do both most excellently.

Phantom

Lovely.

Wow! I love this! I bet Buffy does make horrible lunches, and I bet Spike would eat, too. I could just see them in his crypt, Dawn talking while he eats a lunch that Buffy's hands made. Kudos, and keep writing!

Very nice. I loved the Spike/Dawn friendship in "Buffy" so keep it up.

That was fantastic! You're either a middle schooler, or you're channeling one. Either way, very well done.

Interesting, good work _