Cranky old lady. I don't like her. Questioning their marriage. HUMPH!

Yay! more dragons!

"come and join us, perhaps he will too!"

LOL! Oh, I love Iroh. :D You have the most hilarious sense of humor. I loved the backstory you did for the dragons, by the way.

Whoa...PLOT TWIST!

Cheese and rice, I've never read ANYTHING like this. You're a BRILLIANT author! BRILLIANT!

I especially love your dialouge. It all fits in with their personalities yet its hilariously funny at the same time.

"He’d have to thank them, after he pretended to be mad and upset for a while."

Oh my goodness, that part cracks me up. :D:D:D That suits his personality PERFECTLY! I'm still laughing uncontrollably. :D

Ahem...
CHILD SAFE! You said it yourself, child-safe is the way 2 go. And what do you do? You go to rated R movie! I like your story, but it should be rated M for Mature!

I think that one part was kinda more mature content, so to speak. But other than that it's a great story! You really got the concept of each character! (i know it's probably been a long time since you started the story, but still!)

i hate kinita already

finally! WHA HO!

love it

i loved this chapter, like all the other ones

that was so sad *sniffle* you made me cry!
keep writing!

the suspense is killing me! flamio!

why am I getting the feeling there is some chemistry between Zuko and Suki?!
keep writing [i'm getting suspicious though]

It's so sad about Ediera's death... and Azula doesn't even seem to remember her sister. Curses to the Devil's reincarnation [Azula]
keep writing!