Hilarious! You had me laughing so hard! HA! Blast those Mary Sues and their ever-changing eye colors! Great job. :P

Bravo! That was positively brilliant! I loved it! And you captured the Mary Sue stuff so perfectly, specially with all those descriptive words. Slugworth at the end...hahahahahaha! Again wonderful! I am so glad that you wrote that.

The Oompa Loompa verse was just great and the intentional misspelling of Willy's name was a stroke of genius. That last line was just fantastic. 'He followed me...' Tehee. That was fantastic.

That was just gorgeous :)

::is still giggling::

Oh dear, that's so clever. Seriously lol that's got to be one of the cleverest stories I've ever read, very witty. It's both very well written and so obviously purposely badly written, it's a delight.

Thanks for sharing,
Tinnie

" We really are surprised at you,
Falling for such a Mary Sue! "

LMAO i loved it

My reaction to this story can be summed up in one word:
LOL!

Loved the song, and the chain of paragraphs that all began with 'oh.' Brilliant, as always. You really need to write more. I don't think anything constructive I could have to say would matter on such a parady, so I will just leave it at that. Except write more. Like I already said.
-Andrea
As for the massive post on the Sherlock forum, I'll have to give it some thought before I reply. Glad to know you're still around.

** YOU!

This was wonderful! The Oompa-Loompa song made my day.

Very funny and well written, which seems a little wasted on a MarySue-bashing, but still.

ha ha ha that was so sickeningly adorable! I'm not talking about Theresa-Katrina, of course, but the whole turn-out of it. Very nice spoofing, I must say! Had me giggling. ^^ Maybe it's the fact that it's the wee hours of the morning, or maybe I'm just crazy. I just might add this to my favorites list!

Wow, that made me laugh! You made my day! (well, actually it's 9:30 at night, but who cares?) Good job!

Delicious, divinely, decadently, hysterically *good*. Godiva truffle good. Ghiradelli dark chocolate raspberry good. Russell Stover molasses chews good. I sing your praises!

OMG, that was Monty Python meets Gene Wilder at its best. I probably shouldn't have read it at work... My coworkers are wondering what I was laughing so hard about. Little do they know about the hair-moisture conversation!! LOL!

Just found this...and I must really congratulate you on tackling the M-S problem straight on with this little funny and utterly ridiculous fic. I was laughing when I reached the end. Truly wonderful.

And, lastly, Mary Sues, everywhere, you SUCK!

Now that I have got that out of my system, adieu.

T. Axile.