|Reviews for Her Last Journey|
| mandmy2phans 6/17/08 . chapter 1
EXCELLENT! A very nice fan fic. I especially like how you explained how Avatar knew, all the way at Pluto, that Astra's ship was on a collision course with Mars. Even as a kid, I wondered how on Earth he could know that. :0)
| aviator 12/4/06 . chapter 1
Nice first submission - hope to see more
| GoldAngel2 8/8/05 . chapter 1
What a fine first attempt-your imagery and dialogue mix together and paint a vividly gripping picture of Starsha and Astra's designs for a peaceful universe.
Desslok as he was along with his commanders are as vicious as the Gamilons were before Nova and Derek saved his life-and he is a ruthless and formidable enemy.
What a heartrending last scene-thje ultimate sacrifice for the good of humankind on the desolate serface of Mars.
Excellent job Fluffy.