haha that was funny

Pete: What’s wrong honey?
Pistol: I hate Max! (Runs into her room and slams the door.)
Pete: (Jumps for joy.) Yes!
Pistol: (Reopens her door.) But I’m still in love with him! (Shuts the door again.)
Pete: (Shouting at the ceiling.) Why, why me!

hahaa! That was halarious! I loved it! :D

<3Cally

This would have made on HILARIOUS Goof Troop episode!

LOL! OMG loved it! XDD Hilarious scenes, I love the lines Pete had! XP awesome.

I love this story. I would love to be Max's best man at the wedding even though I am not related to the Goofs but hey, I can pretend can't I?

hahaha, it's great how you kept them in characters, and the humour was not bad either, i really could see this as a goof troop episode.

i always thought that pistol would've had a thing for max. and they actually do quite fit each other. maybe it really could've happened given a few (or ten) years (then again how cliche is that, falling for your older brother's best friend, him considering you like a little sister...), and even if it didn't happen... well, the first crush is always the cutest

The sad thing is I allways thought Max and pistle would make a great couple.

That was cute

Despite the script format, this is a good story. As you showed with "The Life and Times of...", you seem to have an true understanding of and fondness for these characters. This was funny...and made for a nice intro to Bobby.

Pistol: I hate Max! (Runs into her room and slams the door.)

Pete: (Jumps for joy.) Yes!

Pistol: (Reopens her door.) But I’m still in love with him! (Shuts the door again.)

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Ha! I LOVE that part! It's what I would've said to my father!

Anyways, excellent concept and excellent characterization! Hope to see more of you!

For something you picked out an 'old' line up, this was a pretty amusing story. What I didn't like about it, is that it reads as 'script form'. I truly prefer 'story form', but since this is someone else's work, I can't blame you for it, now can I?

One of these days, I'll get to your other "Goof Troop" story, when I can. Anyway, good job with the 'editing', Steve.

Never stop writing.

That was really cute! It would have made a good episode. I liked the intro for Bobby. I hope whoever originaly wrote it finds this and sees how much work you put into it. Thanks for posting a revised version of this great story for everyone here to read.
Keep writin',
-A. W.

Cute story, this could have amde a great eppy! It's so...goofy and in-character. However, you might want to NOT script it, since script is not allowed *grumbles* and this might get removed. Just to warn you. Anyway, nice job.