So sad. T_T I hope you update soon.

I Like It

OMG soo SAD! I loved it!! keep up the great work^_~

If that's the super short ending, I'm very sad.

this is a good story, very interesting. i like it!

Wah you killed Hiei my favorite chapter a good story but so very sad add more now now and BRING HIEI BACK Jessica

How could you How could you How could you How could you HOW COULD YOU HOW COULD YOU HOW COULD YOU HOW COULD YOU HOW COULD YOU HOW COULD YOU why did you kill Hiei scream a mob of fangirls WHY!

The mystery of their relationship is beginning to be revealed. Good story, I like it.

wow this is really good. how did hiei get sick in the first place? why didnt they try sticking him in a cold bath to help bring down the fever? is hiei really dead? has yukina figured out that hiei is her brother by now? please update soon, i cant wait to find out. Ja ne for now.

WOW Hiei died from the fever poor Hiei you must bring him back to life Hiei hasn't told her that he's her real twin brother she's been looking for he's been through to much his life isn't finished add more now now thanks Jessica